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"content": "In recent years, the increased production of consumer goods has led to severe damage to the natural environment, prompting the need for urgent action. This essay will examine the causes of this issue and provide practical solutions to mitigate its impact.\n\nThe proliferation of global manufacturing, rapid technological advancements, and widespread industrialization are the primary drivers of environmental degradation. The use of disposable chopsticks and other utensils has led to widespread deforestation and the loss of wildlife habitats, resulting in a reduction in the diversity of species. Furthermore, the production of smart devices such as smartphones, wearables, and computers relies on rare earth elements such as silver, tin, and nickel, which have taken millions of years to form. In addition, the manufacturing industry's reliance on non-renewable energy sources like fossil fuels has resulted in dangerous emissions that have led to global warming and catastrophic climate change.\n\nTo address these challenges, individuals, manufacturers, and governments can take a range of measures. First, individuals can adopt more sustainable behaviours, such as using reusable containers for takeout meals and beverages. Second, manufacturers can incentivize users to use their products for longer periods, such as by offering discounts to customers who use their devices beyond the average lifespan. Third, governments can provide tax incentives for factories that adopt renewable energy sources and impose penalties on those that fail to make a green transition.\n\nIn conclusion, it is imperative that we take swift action to mitigate the negative impact of increased consumer goods production on the environment. By implementing these solutions, we can preserve our planet's natural resources for future generations.",
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"content": "Life is full of competition. Soon after the release from competitive university exams, the hard fighting for higher positions in a company will be waiting for you. While the competitiveness has been bringing us a convenient society, no small number of employments have been tired of never-ending competitions. No doubt about a positive effect on societies, but when we start to argue about the effect on individuals, it becomes more controversial. This essay will argue the drawbacks of competitiveness for individuals, especially from the perspective of Japanese modern society and typical Japanese office workers. I believe that cooperativeness and uniqueness are sometimes more important attitude than competitiveness.\nFirstly, competitiveness causes less diversity. If there is a competition, there must be the same evaluation metrics to differentiate winners and losers. The evaluation procedure needs to limit the metrics into specific aspects of the human being. Therefore, it is extremely difficult to prove that the metrics are proper for all of the possible cases and effective for the HR evaluation. For example, Japanese companies are likely to judge quantitatively based on the numbers related to performance. However, how can we evaluate the cooperativity or the non-quantitative performance like in creative jobs? Most Japanese companies adopted the HR evaluation methods based on average working hours per day and number of reports monthly. That’s why the Japanese tend to overwork to fulfill this requirement. In addition, as a result of placing more importance in quantity of reports, rather than quality, Japanese employees are prone to choose easy and short-term tasks or outsourcing instead of building by their own methods. This tendency causes fewer complicated and long-term tasks.\nSecondly, competitiveness causes less cooperativeness. Fewer people volunteer to play a disadvantageous role for smooth teamwork. Moreover, some people play an evil role by blaming or cheating the competitors in order to be superior to them. As a consequence, overall efficiency will decline and some people will be overestimated. Even if there are no problems temporarily, the long-lasting large companies will eventually become corrupt, and those who have the most political power, rather than real power, will remain at the top.\nConsequently, competitiveness is the basis of capitalism which brings us a brighter and more convenient society, however, biased evaluation and less cooperative working environment possibly drive people into nervous breakdowns. Karoshi, overwork death derived from too much stress and less sleeping, is one of the most serious social problems in Japan. We may need to rethink about the competitiveness.",
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"content": "I will be trying to convince the population to beleive that the face's on Mars are natural landforms.\n\nNow i will be talking about face one. this face is there in 1976. To my personal vision the face is still sorte of developing, or the picture is really blury. Although it's developing or blury you can still seea face. NASA claim's for it to look or be visualized as a viking. These face's do look like natural landforf's.\n\nThey look like wind or a storm formed them. In face one it look's like there is alot of wind when NASA took the picture. In face two it kinda revels a little more . What im thinking is there had to have been a storm or strong wind for face one to be so blury.\n\nThese face's seem as if they had alot of time to form. Can that mean there natural.\n\nThink about this if these structure's were man made or alein made they wouldn't look like this so what is that telling us. Another reason is if it was man made it would be much smaller. These faces have to be natural landforms. Also to my understanding NASA has been watching the faces for a while.\n\nThen in picture three it is just totaly blown over. It seem's as if wind just keept blowing over then time and time agian. If it was man made this would not have happend they would have kept it clean.\n\nAlthough this is my oppinion many other's agree with what im am trying to argue. I also agree that these are natural land form's and are soon going to be wiped away.",
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"content": "Today,I will be writing an essay that the author suggested Venus is \"worthy pursuit despite the dangers it epresents\"\n\nVenus is the second planet from our sun and otfen reffered to as earth \"twin\",and the closest planet to earth.The only difference is speed that sometimes earth is closer to venus other times to venus. Venus has 97 pecent carbondioxide and over 800 degree farhaniet that\n\nexplain main reason that each mission was unnamed and not a single spaceship has touched down Venus for more than 3 decades even for humans the solar power would be plentiful and radiation of the sun it is not easy condition,but its survivable for humans.\n\nMany\n\nAstronomers and Scientists are interested in\n\nVenus\n\nbecause Venus has some features that are similar to those on earth it may have been\n\nthat Venus was once have been the most earh like planet in our solar system,Researchers think that venus was once covered largely with oceans and could have supported various form of\n\nof lifes like earth,so why not try harder that would allow machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge and seeking\n\nto\n\nIn conclusion, to meet the challenge presented by Venus has worth, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet,but also for knowledge,curositiy for human being.",
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"content": "The use of the Facial Action Code System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. It will save time, very educative ,and it will be very easy to detect the emotional expressions of a person by the teachers and professors.\n\nFirstly, It will save time. In the text it states,\" New software has been developed that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others.\" The text also states,\" This new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising applications for a variety of industries.\" The software saves time and used by other industries for their work to be faster in detecting emotions of a person.\n\nSecondly, it will very easy to detect the emotional expressions of a person by the teachers and professors. In the test it states,\" For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" The text also states,\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Dr. Huang predicts. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This software will aid in our schools for effective supervision by teachers and help students to be productive.\n\nLastly, It is educative. In the text it states, \" According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also even help produce them.\" The text also states, \"They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\" It is very educative because it shows much about the emotions of a person in a given time whether faked or real.",
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"content": "The line chart describes data about the two years of how many visitors to the community website let us discuss the differences between the first year and the next year.\nWe can clearly see the changes between the two years, so in October the people who visit were around 5000 which is nearly the same in the first and second year unlike in September all of them were less than 5000, after that in November, also December we can see the massive change at the next year the was the number of both lines amidst 15000 and 20000, while the first year also the two line where the same but less then the next year, it obvious that the blue line decline at the next three months, also the red line but not in mammouth way.\nIn April.\nAs it is persented In April the all the lines are start to increase but the red line is highest then the blue line however, in May the visitors were 20000 unlike the first year they were less then 10000, but in June it grow to more than 10000 and on other hand the red line increase to more than 20000 , also the next month there were no huge changes, moving to the last month both of line decrease to around 15000.\nOverall, it is clear that the second year the humans who visited the website where more in all the months ulike the last month the where almost the same and the first year was a little but higher.",
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"content": "Everyone person think something like want see If offended one thing think right taken away banned Or liked choice place someone else nt Should right take away nt approve What people came library books magazines music movies like part library wanted every book magazine music movie taken Even others loved saw Do think s fair people approve get pick I think would fair one person able right If something offensive many people mature enough ignore see find like If someone like house said I nt want see demolish like nothing The world would never ending chaos people much power change things It could get worse I encountered problems people agree throwing keeping One solution could move different area certain people would like look item could otherwise separate parts room divided ranges If read think many different options get along worry offending people realize certain person able take one thing would like keep enjoy happy",
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"content": "One method of chosing a President is having an electoral college here in the U.S.A. That means, the people vote for a group of electors. Not the candidate running for President. In that group they count in the votes and elect witch candidate would win.\n\nThere are many people that do no agree with this method. One should be able to put in there vote straight to who wins at an election not send it off to a group of people that one does not know. It's part of the list of rights the people should have. Any one can be a elector. In the past, an elector has change there candiate. so instead of who a person's vote going to who they voted for... it would go to the other candidate. Not everything hat should be right in this world is.\n\nThe \"winner-takes-all\" system is when all electors are awarded to the winning presidential candidate. This helps when it comes down to what is fair and what isn't. When Obama got 61.7 percent and Romney only had 51.3 most electoral votes were on the \"winner-takes-all\" basis.\n\nYes, it's true. Not all state has the same number of electoral votes. But that is just because not every state has the same population as one and other. If every state got the same amount of electoral votes, them it wouldn't be fair. North Carolina doesn't have the same populations as Texas. it wouldn't make sence to give them both just 3 or both 38.\n\nPeople like to do things on there own and like to feel like the contrubuted to socity. One should vote for themselfs on who should run our country. An electoal college is not needed anymore.",
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"content": "I think author concluded story phrase shows mature She saying ready challenges going face For example pass test instead crying said I take next year In story also longed homeland truley missed She coped buying winter hibiscus remind homeland also grandmother overall main character showed depth maturity throughout piece",
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"content": "Do you like to travel around the world? Well if you do you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Even if you dont like to travel your demeanor will change when you join this program. We have table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whitting,and games to pass the time by. You will be so exuberant that you joined. You will be like a kid on Christmas morning.\n\nYou will get to see new places ,and you get to say you have been there before when other people have not been there. You will never be melancholy on this trip beacause there is things to do all the time. You get free breakfeast every morning. There will be eggs,panacakes,bacon,sausage and more. If you join this month you will get a free trip to the next place we go. On the boat there is a pool,and there is a hot tub. The pool and hot tub closes at 10:00.\n\nI cracked my ribs but that did not stop me from having fun. I only had to stop working for a couple days,and then I was better than ever. When joining in this month you get you dont have to pay for a class abought the safeteys of being on a boat. You will be more exuberant than Christmas morning. My freind Don Reist got me into this program,so I hope I can get you to join this program like he did to me.\n\nLets reacap why you should join this program. We have table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whitting,and games. These help take up time while going to are destination. You get to see new places,and get to tell people abought it so mabey they will join to. If you join in this month you dont have to pay for a class abought safety of being on a boat,and you dont have to pay for the next place we go. You get free breakfeast every morning. When I joined I did not know abought if I would like the program but I did,and im still it and I like it even more every day. I hope your demeanor will change like mine did when I joined the Seagoing Cowboys program. That is why I think you should join this amazing program.",
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"content": "The setting effected cyclist bumpy lot hills means work harder Also heat getting dehydrated story cyclist Been rideing long time says I eased past trying keep balance dehydrated state kurmaskie The cyclist little water long trip",
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"content": "Nowadays, latest information is conducted on social medias such as Facebook with their rapid developments. Instead of traditional methods, people prefer to use them as the way to obtain new information. From my perspective, in general, more advantages occur. \r\n\r\nThere is a doubtless limitation for public to read news by social medias - possibility of having fake reports is relatively high because publishers are not all qualified; simultaneously, there is no supervision from the authority. Hence, if there was a fake report released, negative influence might exist. For instance, entertainment section on social medias always publishes articles about a celebrity's actions which are made up. Not only do they harm celebrities' reputation, but also occupy excess social resources. \r\n\r\nHowever, positive effects are various. For individuals, it is a more effective way to contact with the external world. For example, on WeChat, all public masses have their official accounts where they establish an omni-channel to provide people with services. Therefore, consumers only need to scroll their screens whenever they have leisure time and wherever they are. \r\n\r\nMoreover, from government, it is also a representation of enhancing democracy of the nation. Based on John Mill's political philosophy theory, a democratic polity should not prohibit citizens from the freedom of speech. What the social medias are capable of is allowing people to express their own ideas. Thus, for the government, it is beneficial to allow various information on the social medias. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there is a probobility of the existance of fake news, people can still aquire more information in an effective way, while it is also a symbol of democracy of a government. Therefore, advantages outweigh disadvantages.",
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"content": "The Seagoing Cowboys program was very adventurous because of all the fun you can have along the way. When you become a Seagoing Cowboy, you have many opportunities to have fun, such as sight seeing, meeting new people in other countries, and at the end of the journey the holds where the animals were is opened up for many games everyone can play! The Seagoing Cowboys program was an adventure I'll never forget and I hope you'll become a Seagoing Cowboy yourself.\n\nOne of the reasons why the Seagoing Cowboys program is so adventurous was because of all the sight seeing. During my time as a Seagoing Cowboy, I went to many places all over the globe, including Greece, Italy, China, the Panama Canal, and many other places. Some places I went to were the trips of a life time. One of my favorite trips was the Acropolis in Greece. It was special to see and I cherished the opportunity. By becoming a Seagoing Cowboy yourself, you can make your own memories in the world.\n\nAnother reason why the Seagoing Cowboys program is so adventurous is the chance to help people in other countries. I helped a ton full of people as a Seagoing Cowboy and their smiles warmed my heart. By giving people the cattle they need, it ended up helping not only them, but me too. I'm greatful for the opportunity, it made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs. Because of that awareness, my family ended up hosting many international students and exchange visitors for many years. You too can help many people in other countries and help them. By doing this, the world can become a greater place.\n\nThe final reason why the Seagoing Cowboys program is so adventurous is that the end of the journey and during the return, people can have a chance to loosen up a bit and play some games. When all of the cattle are in other countries, the places where they were stored become opened up and you're allowed to play games. Some coyboys enjoy playing baseball and volleyball games, while others like having Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games. All of these games allow a cowboy to spend the rest of the way back having fun and if a cowboy doesn't want to play games, he can stay in his room and enjoy some quiet. You too can become a Seagoing Cowboy and have the experience of a lifetime.\n\nAs you can see, the Seagoing Cowboys program is the chance of a lifetime and a dream come true. By becoming a cowboy, you can make your own adventures and add a little spice to your life. Sight seeing, Meeting new people, and games are just the tip of the iceberg when you're a Seagoing Cowboy. Become a Seagoing Cowboy and you won't regret it. I hope you become a cowboy and have the adventure of a lifetime.",
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"content": "The idea of exploring Venus is a worthy pursuit is dangerous but worth preparing for it. Knowing that Venus is simliar to Earth in a way, it could be another place to call home. It is a closest planet next to home.\n\nFirst off, there has been some spacecraft sent there before but without humans. Mostly cause the ship survived a no more few hours after landing. Along with \"thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus\"(paraghraph 3). It means, humans would over heat badly and possibly fall dead on the spot. With what said, scientests would really have to find a suit for protecting along with temperatures over 800 degreees Fahrenheit.\n\nSecond, Venus might have been the previous home before humans came along. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could hav supported various forms of life\" (paragraph 4). It might mean that different living things would have found a way to adapt there.\n\nFinally, the technology that will be needed. A ship will have to make it through leaving earth to venus without being burned up around 170 degrees Fahrenheit and the air pressure would be dangerous close to sea level on Earth. \"a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way\" (paragraph 5). With what said, a certain metal would have to make it through everything and a persons life.\n\nIt is probably still possible to go there but with the proper gear. Prove the world wrong that it is possible to take challenges and make it happen. Just put thought into it with passion or excitement.",
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"content": "How cool would it be if people did not have to drive their cars anymore? How weird would it look on the roads with a car with somebody actually operating the wheel but not manually driving? That is exactly what smart cars are. Smart cars should not be used because the materials for them are really expensive to get, people still have the ability to drive the smart car, and the smart car is still able to be in a car wreck.\n\nFirst, people still have the power to drive driverless cars. In the article it states, \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" The driverless car still has a way for to check if people have their hands on the wheel or not. People still have to do mandatory activities such as pull over in traffic, or to even stop when there is a car accident.\n\nSecond, the materials for the driverless cars are expensive to afford. The article states, \"These smart - road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" Smarter roads were a way the car could drive but with radio signals going to it. The Radar device used for driving cost two million dollars.That is a lot to spend on one item for the driverless car.\n\nThird, driverless cars are still able to get into carwrecks. According to the article, \"Still, if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. \" If the driverless car malfunctions and gets into a wreck it is\n\nhard to determine who is at fault. Furthermore, Driverless cars do have a safety feature. Displays that are used for entertainment can be turned off when the driver is about to drive at hand. Drivers will not be distracted while driving, they will be looking at the road.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should not be used. They shouldn't be used because the materials for them are very expensive to get, people still have the ability to drive the smart car, and the smart car is still able to be in car wrecks. Smart cars are very cool to think about but also take a lot of money for the sensors and the devices they use inside them.",
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"content": "Would technology that reads off our emotions be a good thing? New software has been developed that improves the accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. This new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising applications for a variety of industries. Technology that tells us how we are feeling could bring up a lot of people especially if we are feeling down or a little blue.\n\nImagine what life would be like if we had technology that calculates our emotions just by the expressions we give off. We have 6 basic emotions that assoicate with the characteristics of our facial movements. The 6 characteristics are happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. We as humans can tell when someone is feeling sad or happy but sometimes they could be in indinal. But with the technology we have it could even indentify if someone is having mixed emoitons. Most people communicate through facial expressions anyway so why not have the technology that could tell us what the other person is feeling. The facial experiment would also make you feel slightly happy. According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving you facial muscles not only expresses emoitons but also may even help produce them. So the quote \" Putting on a happy face \" actually works!\n\nWhoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions! With the Facial Action Coding System we could be able to idnentify the emotions that people sometimes have a hard time expresing. It would also help produce the emotion. Therefor they should release the software that could perceive the emotion of others.",
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"content": "There are a lot of advantages on why we should limit car usage. Limiting car usage to save money will help alot of families out because you dont always have to spend your money on buying a new car everytime it brakes down haveing to buy a car when it stops woking is a lot of money like $40,000. You can be using that money to buy food for your house or buying new parts for your car. Plus you would probably have to find a place that you can put your car like a garage at work or a parking lot that will have to fit millions of cars at a time.\n\nIn Vauban,Germany 70% of the people do not own cars and 57% sold a car just so that they can move to Germany. They have only sold them because in Germany there isnt alot of room thats why they have to descrease the usage of cars too. In the united states some people dont have cars because of the gas price or because they cant really aford a car. In Bogota,Colombia millions of colombians either have hiked,biked,or took buses on a car-free day to aviod traffic jams. There for car usage should be limited. It is also a good way to take away stress and air pollution tyo help the earth out. Also not a lot of people care about getting a listens because they find it better to walk or car pool with friend or use public transpotation so that is really helping out our planet because on less person means less on polluting the earth. But the only bad thing is that when they have children they are going to have to buy cars so they can beable to take their children were they need to get to like school or some kind of sports practice. So limiting car usage is good for the community and pedestrians, bicycle can be a good way to get places it saves time , lowers emissions and improves safety so there are no more traffic jams.",
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"content": "Since World War II, driving has been the center of everyone's mind. Do you really think driving is a necessity? Many people will say yes, but most will argue no. Limiting car usuage will be great for us citizens and our very own planet Earth.\n\nTo start off, driving causes you a stressful day, but not driving will save you time and money. Gas prices are more than $2 a gallon. One car takes more or less 10 gallons. Filling your tank up will cost you around $60 or more. In my eyes, it's cheaper to take public transportation than to drive. While taking the bus or the train , all you really have to do is wait , pay to get in, find your stop, if your destination is a little farther, there can be another bus and you'll be at your stop. On the other hand, Driving, your worrying more. Your worried about if you have gas, is there a traffic jam, why is this driver driving so slow. You're getting fustrated rather than taking the public transportaion. In Colombia there is this program where you dont drive for a day. \"In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams\"(Source 3). Not only did it cause a less stressful day, it allowed them to get some exercise.\n\nFurthermore, I have a question. How many people like smoggy days? No one. Reason I asked this specific question is mainly because if you enjoy driving, you must enjoy the smog. \"After days of near-record polution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\"(Source 2). Although Paris has more smog than other European capitals, it isnt good for our very own health, but it isnt good for our planet either. When Paris did this \"No Driving\" campigan, \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after 5 days of intensifying smog\"(Source 2).\n\nOn the other hand, driving isn't really important as it used to be. We have all these technological advances, that honestly make driving not necessary. We all have a cell phone, we can all video chat. Some work together, some go to school together. We all can car-pool. There was this quote that I read, and after doing some thinking, it made me realize that driving isn't really important as it seemed to be. \"How much you drive is as important as whether you have an hybrid\"(Source 1). Hybrids save alot of wrong doings that we already do to this Earth. Along with eletronic cars. Driving a hybrid, yes it's saving the world but your still causing traffic, and wasting money. Some people have already quit driving. \"With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit.\" (Source 4). America has went so far into the stopping of driving that on highways there's more tolls. Tolls that we can't pay to another person, tolls where they take a picture of your license, find out you information, and send you the amount you owe through the mail. Each toll is different some can be 75 cents or a $1.50. From your home to the mall, depending where you live, you'll pass by more a less 5 tolls. In total thats around I'll say $3.75 or $7.50. Public transportation saves you more money. Mall's have buses where it picks you up from a specfic location to the mall and back. That's saving you time and your money.\n\nIn conclusion, limiting car usuage can be an advantage to both young, old and even to our very own planet Earth. It can help our economy, save our pollution rate, but also help us lose the weight. Now its your turn, Are you willing to make the change ?",
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"content": "Venus is called the \"Evening Star\" for it shines bright in the midnight sky when we can see it. Venus could've supported life at one point in time. Venus is very close in density and size of Earth, some call Venus our sister-like or twin planet.\n\nThe Astronomers are so fascinated by this planet because is so much like earth it could've had life on it at one time. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth,\" the Author stated. Venus also has mountains, craters, and valleys just like Earth. We don't know much about the planet, so we might as well get to a lot more about to see what the possiblilities are of our planets end. \"Our travel on Earth and beyound should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" We should explore and find new things instead of just in our solar system. To know more about space and get a better idea of what is to come an will happen.\n\nVenus could've supported life at one time, some say this is why it's so close in size. It's our \"twin,\" it has a lot of features Earth has. Even though we don't know a whole lot about Venus we hopefully will in the future.",
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"content": "Driverless cars would be a very good thing for people to have. The only problem is the issue with people becoming too comfortable with the car and forgetting their basic driving skills. Even though we don't have completly driverless cars we have some cars that are becoming pretty independent. These advancements that have been made to cars have many things about them that make it easier for people to drive. However, like most things there are alwasy a downside to things. Even though there are some bad things about the development of driverless cars, the good still outways the bad and has brought the technology of cars to a whole new extreme. This consecpt of driverless cars is a great idea and is capable of being safer, but with this new advancement in driverless cars it is causing people to feel too comfortable and rely heavily on the machine to do the driving and not the actual driver.\n\nThe advancement in cars have brought many new features that have made driving much easier. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" in paragrpah seven, the author shows us the advancement in modern days cars, \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. In fact, non of the cars developed os far are completely driverless. They can steer, Accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accientes.\" This section of text bring up several different points. These advanced cars and being able to do a lot of different things that are very useful, but as it says in the text it can not do everything correctly and still relys on human interaction. The problem with the concept of driverless cars is the human interaction part. Human error won't ever go away. As of now humans for the most part, know what to do in situations more than any computer knows what to do. This is the fault in driverless cars, the capibility of thinking and processing like a human does. If technology can go as far as that, we will avoid all car acciedents and thousands of deaths every year.",
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"content": "Many people have different thoughts and beliefs about the true explanation of the \"Face on Mars\" and why each belief makes sense. Some think that it's an ancient civilization, and others think that it's just a unique landform on Mars. Many other beliefs have been thought about too. There are many opinions about each belief, but I believe that it's just a unique landform.\n\nFor years NASA has been studying this object they call the \"Face on Mars\". They have gone through and tried to prove many different theories and havn't been able too. NASA has also photographed the object several times, but it's still not enough to tell them the explanation for it. It has appeared on Hollywood films, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines.\n\nI only believe in one theory. I believe that the object is just a natural landform. There has yet to be any strong facts that the object is an ancient civilaztion, or a place for aliens, so the evidence that the scientists recieve to prove its just a natural landform is right there. Scientists don't seem to be getting any type of evidence that the \"Face on Mars\" is something else besides a natural landform, so to me, the proof to show, and convince people, that it's a natural landform, is that they aren't getting any strong facts, or pictures stating and showing that its something else.\n\nSome accuse scientists of hiding what they do find, because they believe that it's something else, but why would scientists hide it. If NASA had, or has found anything to prove that it is for a fact an ancient civilization, or something to do with aliens they would let the people know because it would benefit them.\n\nThis is my proof to show people that what I believe could absolutely be true. There are many other theories, but this is the only one that I believe, and that actually has evidence to back itself up.",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez creates specific mood He talks family love home For example Narciso says heart home kitchen always passionate Cuban music playing In neighborhood Narciso says cultures came together parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us I tell important friends family Narciso family welcoming caring Narciso believes home filled scent music life love I believe mood house obvious Narciso neighbors family",
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"content": "A couple months ago hanging freind It came spend first extreamly bored went walk go find something doWe found friend dylan skatepark stopped talk After hung two hours headed back houseWhen opened door sister started freaking left got stucked younger brother nt yell back nt want drama Her sister got even mad jesssika showing reaction sister By ten minutes exploded started throwing around freaking Me looked stated laughing really reallyhard funny sister looked mom calmed sistuation I made bed bedroom floor falling asleep bothbursted laughter funnest long time",
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"content": "In my opinion, driverless cars are kind of a waist of time. Like it says in paragraph 8, \"Why would anyone anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\". Also it can create other issues like severe laziness, there is already a large amount of people that are very lazy and having a driverless car can make that worse.\n\nSome things that might be good about driverless cars are that they can reduce the amount of car accidents we have each year. It can also help people develop practices like focusing on the road at all times and not texting while driving. It helps by what it said in paragraph 8, \" Such displays can be turned off instantly when the drivers trying to text with a cell phone. In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\" Some negative aspects can be again causing people to become more lazy and people may become dependent on their car since they don't have to drive it anymore.\n\nOverall, even though i said in the beginning that driverless cars are a waist of time, there are more positive apects than negative. If people really start using driverless cars, they might become dependent on their car but they can develop good habits when it comes to driving. If people start developing better habits, we could possibly have a better future.",
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"content": "Who woul've thought that you would live to see a driverless car? Well, according to this passage, driverless cars are coming. Would you get a driverless car? I know I would. My position on driverless cars is that I am all for it. I think this would be a good idea for public transportation, they drive for you, and they are smart.\n\nFirstly, lets talk about transportation. There are many different kinds of transpirtaion such as trains, taxis, and busses. Are those efficent ways of transpirtaion? Yes, but I think a driverlesss car would be even more efficent. According to paragraph 1 Sergey Brin foresees that the driverless car would use half the fuel of today's taxis and would offer far more flexibility than a bus. I agree with Sergey Brin with his statement that says he believes such cars would fundamentall change the world.\n\nAlso, these cars drive for you. Its in the name driverless cars. When you are driving you are considering your own safety, but not everyone is concerned with yours as well. That another reason I support driverless cars. Of course texting and driving is illeagal, but people still do it anyways; thats why if you had a driveless car it wouldn't make it okay, but it would for sure be more safe than if some one was driving manually and texting at the same time. In paragraph 2 it states that \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when oulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through road work or accidents.\" The fact is they are still driving for you, and for your saftey they alert you to do these things, and I think drivers can handle that.\n\nAs you can see, these cars are smart. In paragraph 4 it says \"Googles modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an internal motion sensor.\" In that statement you can seee just how smart the car is, probably smarter than the average person. All these features are also just for you and your safety. This is another reason why I would go with a driverless car.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are coming sooner than we realize. Maybe you should think about investing in one. As you read, you can see why I would get one. The driverless car would be a good idea for public transportation, they drive for you, and they are smart. I don't think there is a better car than that.",
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"content": "The author sugggests that studying venus is benifical to us and can lead to many great things. But getting on to the planet and studying it might be harder then even getting to it. They have not sent a manned space craft there because of hazorduas conditions. The conditions on the planets are terrible its hot, hard to see on, and has a high pressure. but hese are some of the challanges.\n\nIt has a thick atmosphere of amlost 97% carbon dioxide covering the whole planet. Even worse the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The planets tempature averages 800 degrees which is 90% greater then what we experince here on earth. Which is not even possible for any human to endour. Its environments pressure is so high it can crush a submerine that can stand even the deapest part of the ocean on earth. The environment is so strong it can liqufiy any metal that gose there. Lastly its impossible to see the land even from above where the tempatures and pressure is more bareable.\n\nEven with all these conditions and challanges semming near impossible to live there is hope. There are materials being tested with promising outcomes and lasting 3 weeks in venus conditions test. Making planes that can stay above the clouds and be able to survive off solar power and have condition liveable. But in conclusion there are hopes and proof that one day we might be able to go to venus and research the planet and obtain meaning ful knowledge",
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"content": "Nowadays, there has been a widespread argument that students face obstacles to focus on school's subjects. This essay will try to identify the factors contributing to this and also explain some solutions that may emerge of this.\r\n\r\nAs we know that children tend to be active during school time because movement and social interaction are their way to recharge the energy. They are easily to get anxious and bored by sitting for a long time and listening to the teachers explaining materials, so they do another activity. As a consequence, when it comes to studying, it causes them tired. Secondly, it is a natural that the amount of children's attention time is not as much as adult, they may spend less than 90 minutes which the adult usually have. For instance, if children are encouraged to focus on linguistics lecturers, it will surely lead them to a distraction. \r\n\r\nHowever, every challenges could be addressed by including parents to help students overcome their problems. Children's guardian can give time management training, so children have a clear border on which occasion they should focus. As a consequence, they spend an effective time to study in a class and reach an optimum result. Besides, parents have big authority to discipline their children by giving them reward and punishment systems. For instance, if children is attentive to study in a certain time, they would receive a present so it motivates them to make a progress day by day.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, by nature, children have limited capacity to absorb school materials straight forward, because the lack of attention power, however it can be solved by contributing parents in a way of time schedule and rewarding schemes.",
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"content": "There were some experts who believe that when a country is already wealthy and rich, Additional enlarge in economics wealth wouldnt make the citizens anymore gratify, I absolutely disagree because any additional enlarge means the rise for both the nation and people, Which will help the country throughout the journey.\n\nAdditional increase in economics will provide the country with a lot of income which will open new path's for greater things and will help with the development of the nation it self and the people because the improving of life facilities will improve the living and inteligence of the people which will also provide good education, increasing income will also contribute to the reaissance of the people and increase the workforce, And can be one of the 10 top leading countrys as will.\n\nA country who's already rich and developed should not be held back from achieveing there goal, there are no limits to evolution the richness and the development of the nation the safest and the most greatest way to keep on achieveing the best results and the strengthening the capabilities of the people, The increasing of the country resources strengthns the people resolve and it helps more to unite the people .\n\nIn conclusion there is no limits for a country who wants to keep on developing it self , And if they are togther , the people and the leaders of goverment will awaken the nation and reach the summits , Evolution has no limits they only need two things determination and resolve .",
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"content": "In recent years, there has been a trend in some countries where people get more and more interest about the history of the house or building they live in. This essay will discuss the reasons for the trend and the methods that can be used for historical research.\r\n\r\nThere are different reasons for understanding the significance of the house or building. One such can be the curiosity and fascinating with history. Besides, the following for the desire of preserving and sharing local heritage can motivate house owners to be interested in. That is especially reasonable for people who know their genealogy well and have a house by inheritance. Another reason is exploring the history behind the house. For example, that is a popular plot development in paranormal movies when characters discover what is going on with them and their environment. The other reason can be finding out about the construction and architectural style of a house with the goal of residential renovations and improvements.\r\n\r\nThere are different ways to research the heritage of a house. The easiest one is to find oral stories by asking old neighbors what they know about the area and what they witnessed in past living in the area. Other sources refer to local archival records, museum exhibitions, and government institutions. They should the lots of notes such as original blueprints, careful documentation, and previous owners. Some information can be found on the Internet forums of local historical societies.\r\n\r\nPeople are interested in finding out the history of their houses because they wish to feel the sense of connection and belonging to history. Moreover, there might be practical reasons for a renovation project. The information can be obtained from neighbors, archives, exhibitions, or searching on the Internet.",
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"content": "Reading this article on \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" there would have to be an agreement on technology to read the emotional expressions of students. Well technology to begin with now adays is so advanced almost anything is possible. The reasoning behind how computers can read peoples emotions is proven by The Facial Action Coding System.\n\nThe sensors in a computer can decode how you are feeling just by the movement in a persons face called the \"action unit.\" Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS, has already classified the six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. This is based off the movement of our facial muscles. There are different muscles in your face that help our cheeks, eyes, mouth and forehead to move different ways when we make different facial expressions. When we are angry, we squint our forehead together and our mouth tightens. When we are happy, the eyes squint and rise, along with our cheeks and mouth. it opens wide and the corners of our mouth also rise. along with our other emotions, FACS detects the movement of these muscles and determines whether we are happy or just faking it. Even by the slightest different movement, when a smile is on your face but isnt't real. Everyday, its seen on someones face normally their true emotion. If a person is smiling but not a big, and you are surrounded by this person, you may be able to tell if it's real or not. FACS proved that it van detect emotion through videos, images, or even in a mona lisa painting.\n\nYes, I agree with the article that was written becuase not only from the evidence that was supported in the article, everyone has put on a face that wasn't real and had been called out on it. Even the expressions a person makes are instinctual. When you get angry, sad, or happy, you make a face unintentionally before you even think about it. A person doesn't put on a front when they stub there toe. That persons face will cringe and they may cry or scream. FACS is accurate and even without it, it's sort of a given how someone is feeling by their facial expressions.",
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"content": "In a student enviorment this technology would help teachers understand what problems the student is having on a particular problem or lesson. Is it not part of learning, for students to ask the teacher for help? Also it would be difficult for every school system to encorperate this technology into there computers in order to make there lessons better for that student.\n\nOn one side of the argument, this technology could prove useful for teachers and students alike. For students it could make the lesson easier to understand and then the students would understand the material and be better a what ever subject they were stuck on. Then for the teachers it would be easier for them because then the teacher could help that particular student who is struggling to learn this new subject and teach them a different way that maybe would seem easier to that student. This is evident in paragraph 6 when it says \"A classroom computer could reconize when a student is becoming confused or bored and figure out a new lesson or modify it\n\nOn the oppisite end, this technology could not help the students or teachers at all because the teacher does not use computers or the system gave the student and different way but it seems harder than the last, then the teacher would have to find and entire new way to help this student learn this topic.\n\nBut then again, this new technology could end up being very beneficial to both the student and the teacher by giving the student and easier time to learn the topic and the teacher and easier time to teach the topic that the student or the entire class is struggling with it. Also this technology for better or worse would help teachers learn what that student is struggling in without the student even telling the teacher\n\nSo in conclusion, this technology would help both the students and teachers by giving the teachers a helping hand on what subject he/she really needs to work on, and it would help the student by giving an easier time learning the topic with a new method",
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"content": "In today's society, there is so much value given to youthful appearance that some people become obsessed with the idea of looking younger than their actual age. I believe this trend poses some adverse effects on people's financial and mental well-being.\r\n\r\nThe most apparent reason why people make tremendous efforts trying to appear young is that there is generally significant appreciation given for the youthful outlook. Youth is perceived as a symbol of beauty and freshness, which many individuals try to relate to. Therefore, as long as this attitude exists, people will always make an effort to look younger.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are some negative consequences of idealising a youthful appearance. People trying to relate to their younger version constantly live with worries about others' opinions. As a result, they continuously experience high-stress levels and, occasionally, depression. Moreover, apart from physical consequences, they also have to deal with a financial burden. Although cosmetic tools are inexpensive, the desire to look young rarely lets people restrict themselves to basic makeup materials. They may, for example, try out plastic surgery, which is considered to be one of the most expensive methods of skincare in contemporary medicine. Allocating vast amounts of money for such costly operations, people frequently drain their personal or family budget.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, people nowadays are overly obsessed with the idea of looking younger. Although their efforts to improve their appearance certainly make them happier in the short term, they will need to deal with some psychological and financial effects in the long term.",
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"content": "There many works modern times considered provacative offensive Some even unfit young eyes There many reasons come removing books shelves I believe one politician artist alike right put someone else s work There definitely books libraries would nt dreamt checked ordinary person books put I nt believe person s work instilled hope money beliefs elbow grease removed public No matter offensive wrong work time heart soul put book It truth done past keep rebellions shifts power nevertheless I still disagree For example even today illegal even This specific reason course bad one I believe book still available people read learn past As many centuries ability publish book means ability remembered forever many people put soul book write These books represent ability think freely one remove books society one remove free free thinking society well This accentuated especially dark psychological science fiction novel This book almost prophetic descriptions future society perspective person almost totally accurate would happen one take books society even censored long time Of course conveys extremist view censorship probably wo nt happen near future least It however dark omen come censorship freely given power There many views one single topic book idea That nt mean however viewed wrong put This applies music movies magazines websites books alike If one removes society form raw standpoint removing piece flavor individuality society If censorship given free reign even simply extremist radical ideals people never full ability learn mistakes know future simply history repeating Of course viewpoint governments simply let terrorists radicals spread ideals please Once one proven threat menace public definitely taken custody convicted wrongsThere doubt mind law upheld overextend boundaries Censorship whole helpful process benefit public removes ability see raw cold truths life This keeps ever learning safe truly think believe ideals When politicians step boundary art music literature even education extent try keep flourishing naturally would something must done I m inciting rebellion I truly believe politics rule artistic soul average man That society becomes selfdestructive loses concern connection world",
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"content": "New tchnology is forming everyday. Especially in this generation computers are evolving. Scientists are finding ways to develop technology more and more each day.\n\nIn this article, Computers are developing to how a person is feeling, even when they try to hide their emoions. It is the latest software innovation. The software can calculate emotions by a person's facial muscle movements. A computer can recognize the subtle facial movements of a human.\n\nThis software innovation was from a collboration of Professor Thomas Huang, ofthe Beckman Institute for Advanced Science and with Professor Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. Doctor Huang and his colleagues are experts at developing more ways for computers and humans to communicate. This innovation was showing people an example of Mona Lisa and how it works. It can calculate a person's emotions.\n\nThe process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D model of the face. All 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Then dotcor Huang relies on the work of psychologists. So they can classify the emotions. There are six basic emotions; anger, disgust, fear, happiness, sadness, and surprise. The emotions are associated with the charactirisrics movements of the facial muscles. \"the facial expressions of each emotion are universal\" said Doctor Huang.\n\nIn this article, technology is developing to create wonderful things, like finding more ways for humans and computers to communicate. Example, a couple of professors and their colleagues created an innovation that lets a computer detect peoples emotions. They detected Mona Lisa's emotions. The process is easy, but takes time to learn. Over\n\nthe years, this generation is developing very much. People are creating new things each day. Things can moditfy technology communication.",
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"content": "I support this new technology. It can be very useful in the future. With this new technology, we will be able to tell th emotions of some of the oldest painting. Some of history's greatest secrets could be unlocked with this technology. This technology can tell the facial expressions on anyone's face. It can be used in everyday life.\n\nThis technology is great in many ways, but it can also have some bad qualities about it too. People may not care for this new technology, they may think it is a waste. Others might think it is the best thing they have ever seen. Some people might say there is no place for it in the world. Other people might say it is the best thing that has ever been invented. It just depends on the person.\n\nThis new technology coul be revolutionary, but it also could be unwanted. It might be ahead of its time, but it also could be the invention of the century. Now with this technology we can depict emotions like we were never able to before.",
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"content": "Imagine turning on your computer and reading something negitive that makes you sad then your computer changes the screen. The use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is a good thing. This makes learning easier for students and helps them comperhend better. There's 1 main reason why and that's because it helps you learn.\n\nFor students learning somehting new is always hard, but it's more hard when you dont have a teacher around to explain it for you. The article states \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". This basically shows you that whenever your not for sure about something changes will be made to help you understand what your better.\n\nIn conclusion my 1 main reason why is because it helps you learn. With teachers not being able to answer your question outside of school, having a computer that can help you based on you facial expression would benefit alot. Anyone can say they've learned somehting but your look says it all.",
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"content": "In the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", it explains the argument against and for cars that can drive without human reliability. Driverless cars are cars that can function, some of the time, without a driver in hand. From time to time they may need one. There are both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars.\n\nDriverless cars would be a negative aspect in society. An example of that being the lawsuits that can come out of the accidents that aren't caused due to the driver yet are caused due to the cars being driverless. If the cars are \"free\" to do what they are supposed to do, there will be plenty of accidents that may include severe injuries or even death in the early upcoming of these cars. The car manufacturer will get sued by either the driver or the person who was injured in the wreck and this may include the driver of the car and, of course, the other individual. Not only will the companty get sued, the driver may also get sued too. \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" Another example of why cars should be driven by humans is the safety and risk that is involved. Even though many cars that are somewhat computer generated or have some sort of high tech configurations may help, something is bound to go wrong here. With the amount of technology that exists today, something bad has happened all the time. For example, smart phones that are used a lot eventually will malfunction and may go out at any given time. Nothing is guarunteed 100% safety. These driverless cars may malfunction on the road and the car may do things it wasn't intended to do. This happening will not only affect the driver, it may harm other that are involved. \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drives, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drives.\" Drivers should maintain the car at all times.\n\nIn the article, it explains what driverless cars are and what these cars are intended to do. Driverless cars can injure or even kill drivers, passengers, and pedestrians if a malfunction is to happen. They may also cause a great amount of lawsuits towards the company and the driver. Therfore, driverless cars are a negative aspect for future society.",
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"content": "My argument is that others should participate in the Seagoing cowboys program. Some reasons you should join are they travel the world take care of needy animals get to see amazing sights and help transport animals. Sometimes they also find ways to have fun they box, play games, explore the world, play sports like Table tennis tournaments,fencing,reading,whittling, and also games help time pass.Bieng a Seagoing cowboy also helps many civillians by shipping animals around the world they will have food and milk they would probably have clothing and people will get to eat again and try to go back to living a regular life.\n\nMore reasons you should go is because you change peoples lives especially after having a war or a natural disaster.You have to take care of cattle on a cattle boat. The cattle trips would be an unbelievable opprtunity for a small-town boy/girl.Besides helping people you have the amazing chance to visit places for free probably. You also experience adventures including Greece,China,the Atlantic ocean and more. There are many diffrent jobs a person could do on a cattle boat you could be a watchman/woman or just a regular caretaker you could clean stalls.There arent really any dangers well except falling over and drown or fall over and be eaten by a shark. You travel 24 hours about 7 days and you also have water horses and other animals example cows pigs baby cows and baby pigs,baby horses you have to feed them clean up there poop clean they're stalls its like working at a farm.\n\nTaking care of the farm animals is easy for some people. Thats mainly all you do.But you still get to see the sites. And work diffrent jobs on the boat.Play games when everything is tooken care of.",
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"content": "The topic I will be talking about today is a opinon on driverless cars. The passage informes the reader that many companies are working on the concept, of fully driverless car's. Seems scary but if it's safer than a human-driven car, then the world could just be that much safer.\n\nMy thought on driverless cars is that if its safer, then I'm up for it. My thing is though if their is a maulfuntion or a error in the programming, and a auto-mobile accident occurs then who fault is it? Because when you buy the car you are worry free of collision's or accidents and things of thar nature. So if the programs aren't ready for taking over human funtions, and its not 100% efficent for every day situations. It needs more work but eventualy it'll take place in history as the fisrt driverless car. As cool as it seems it could be more dangerous than human driver's. If it can be pulled off then im up for it.\n\nMy thought is any manufacturers that release these cars should be 100% sure that no error is in play. Its a very good idea in my opinon.",
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"content": "To me the object does look like a face. But to me it also looks like a bunch of rocks put together and the about to break apart. Also the face is a natural landform that probably was built by water and and dirt. That formed over the year and got so hard that now its starting to crack and form a object that looks like a face.\n\nIn the article it says \"twenty five years ago something funny happened around Mars\". So that makes me think that rocks or dirt builded up and now starting the crack. On Mars there' s a bunch of rock and dirt. But also the article said \"A few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see\". \"The caption noted a \"huge rock formatoin which resembles a human head\".\n\nMy conclusion is that somebody will find out what it is. But also find out the cause of it and what harm can it do. Not only that but whatg do it stand for and why is it just now happening after all these years that has passed by. But this is my conclusion for this article here today.",
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"content": "People have different views about whether youngsters should straightly get a job after leaving school or go to university or college to continue learning. Both two groups have their own reasons, but personally, I am inclined toward the latter opinion. \n\nThere are a number of reasons why some believe that the young had better search for jobs right after school. Firstly, in today’s world, there is a large number of students who choose the wrong majors for studying, leading to wasting their time and a lot of money. Secondly, in some conception, going to work early is an opportunity for the young to experience reality sooner. For example, that young people get a job at the age of 18 means they likely have a chance to be successful earlier than their friends who participate in higher education. \n\nOn the other hand, I would argue that it is much more beneficial for youngsters to continue their learning journey at universities or colleges. The first reason is that if we have a chance to study in a professional educational institution, we will acquire not only essential knowledge about our field but also priceless lessons and experiences from our lecturers. This is so amazing because this can help the young to save a huge amount of time figuring it out themselves and make their career paths more secure. In addition, universities or colleges are extremely good environments for young people to meet and get closer to peers and professors, which translates to some soft skills development such as communication, presentation, and teamwork skills, for instance. These are all vital factors contributing to a successful career. \n\nIn conclusion, although it might seem sensible for the young to join the labour market early, I strongly stick to my opinion that youngsters should go to universities or colleges for a better educational background.",
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"content": "To me I like the idea of having driverless cars, because if someone goes on a long vacation and they did not want to fly they would have to drive. When you are driving for a long period of time your legs will eventually get tired and you will have to stop at rest station. With the driverless cars they will drive themselves and you can just sit back and relax while of course still paying attention to the road ahead of you. This will get you to your destination in less time because you will make less stops.\n\nIn the article is states, \"In 2013, BMW announced the development of Traffic Jam Assistant. The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" This is a good thing for these types of cars because you do not want your car to just go straight through a construction zone and not be able to stop it. Or you do not want your car to go the wrong way if there is a detour. I like the idea on how if the driver needed to he can take over the wheel and get going the correct way.\n\nI agree that these cars could be a good thing for us in the future because of the things that I have said above. These cars may not have sounded like a good thing in the beginning but as of right now they are an up and coming thing for us. Even if you like to drive this does not mean you have to get one of these types of cars. It is just a good idea for people whose legs can get tires really quick or if you are going on a long car trip. This car is the way to go.",
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"content": "Driving canbe a fun thing to do and it also can be dangreous, so there shoud be ways to make it easier for people to drive. I know if i were to be driving that i want to be safe as possibally and be able to drive with out no big accident. There is already to much stuff happening to drivers from texting, bad wheater,or freak accidnts. Why not to stop all of that by supporting driverless cars or smart cars.\n\nI feel like that driverless cars is a good thing to have and there are not the many reassons why to not have them. For starters there been a whole lot more accidents with out driverless cares because with driverless cars they can help you. There had been many accidents that happen because of brakes or steering wheels but with driverless cares or smart cars that can help out a lot of people by them being able to break their selves. When backing up a car their motion sensor can pick that up by warning you if your to close to a car or not because it is hard to back into tight spots. Looking out the mirror can be hard to do espically with younger people driving so that right there is why driverless car are a good thing for people. With that technology can take a stress out of peoples life and driving is one of the most dangerous things to do.\n\nLike in paragraph two tv and movies have been fascinated with driverless cars so it is time now to have them instead of going against it. The future is hear and old things will have to go like typerwritters are not well known because of the technology we have now. For better examples Googles driverless cars had been here since 2009 and havent had a crash yet. As it was saying in paragrph seven they are really driverless cars people still have to the same thing but the only thing driverless cars are doing for people is assisting them. Them are my reasons why i think that driverless cars are a positive thing.",
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"content": "It is believed by some that adverts are not necessary and they are not manipulated by advertisements when they go shopping. Although this may be true to a certain extent, it is my firm belief that advertisements still have influences on customers. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are reasons why buyers think advertisements are not helpful. To begin with, feedback coming from relatives or friends could be one of the most reliable recommendations. In other words, customers often opt for choosing goods from the shop that they have heard about. For instance, a lot of Vietnamese people purchase products at the shop about which they have received positive comments from their friends or relatives. Moreover, several people may find it a waste of time when watching adverts. Instead of spending time watching lots of advertising campaigns, they could do many other useful activities, such as reading books or learning new knowledge. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I am firmly convinced that advertisements play a fundamental role in persuading buyers. First and foremost, today’s advertisements often have high quality. They usually have an attractive appearance and provide enough information for customers. As a result, buyers might choose the products. Secondly, lots of companies and brands these days invite celebrities to appear in their advert campaigns. As a result, these advertisements may have great influences on the fans of these celebrities. To illustrate this point, products advertised by Son Tung M-TP, a famous singer in Vietnam, often have a high rate of buyers. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there are some who are not affected by advertisements, I strongly believe that adverts still have certain impacts on the buying decisions of customers.",
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"content": "I know this Face is just a natural landform because, in passage 5, its says, \"some people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars, evidence that NASA would rather hide\". This shows that people are going against what scientist are saying and that people have opinons that this is just a natural landform, and that this was naturally formed on Mars.\n\nAlso, people have taken pictures of this landform with a camera that is ten times sharper than the Viking photos, stated in passage 7. After they took these pictures with this high tech camera it showed there was no alien monument. When this landform was made and the first photo was shown it formed a humans face, it didn't form an alien. In passage 3 it says, \"illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth\" of a human being.\n\nIf a alien were to make this landform they would probably make it of them, something that actually looks like them not some other creature, like a human. \"When the camera was located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98 it was cloudy on the Red Planet\". While they were searching they never seen Alien markings.\n\nSo therfore, the clouds being so cloudy the alien markings where shown as never visible because, they were covered if there was any alien markings but, the camera shows there is no alien markings and that this is a natural landform. Some people have there opinons on if this was reall made by an alien but very few scientist believe this was made by an alien although some do. This is why I say that this is a natural landform and is not made by any type of alien in any form and that this landforn looks naturally made on Mars.",
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"content": "The features setting major affect cyclist It hot day desert California limited water supply It starts becoming hot water supply begins decrease quickly The old men says have left porch since office gave wrong directions Yosemite ended getting lost hot California desert He eventually came fishing store refreshed alot f water sink way Yosemite",
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"content": "Smart cars are shown to be the new thing in the future. But, are smart cars really that necessary? They can malfunction and end up worse than your dreams. Even though these cars are being tested and upgraded, they can always have a fail. I am against the development of these cars because they could be a huge danger to the world, this will only make people more lazy, and people could get distracted and not pay attention to the roads.\n\nThese cars could be a danger to our world. They not only could put humans in danger, they could be a danger to pets as well. No matter how well the technology could be, there is no garuntee that there won't be a malfunction. They can upgrade the technology as much as they want, but nothing can garuntee the safety of humanity. There are many things that can go wrong. The possibility is high and the list of bad things is long. It's best not to risk lives and just stop manufacturing smart cars. These cars can be far more dangerous to the world.\n\nMaking an advance in technology will only make people more lazy. They will become less interested in the staying active by wanting more advanced technology. It's not bad to have great technology and use it for amazing things. But taking advantage of it can make it dangerous. People can request to use this technology for their good. But is it really for their good if they are wanting it for chairs that can move them to where ever they want to? Soon there will be escalators everywhere, replacing every stair case there is. We shouldn't let this happen to our world. Soon we will end up lazy and fat like the people from Wall-e. They took advantage of their technology; therefore, that's something we shouldn't do. We should stop making these advancing, and stop making humanity lazy and worse.\n\nThese cars will make people get distracted and not pay attention to the roads. Since the car will be driving, people will decide to relax and pay no attention to where they are going. This can cause many accidents to occur. In the article it talks about how they will install vibrating seats so that when the cars approach a working zone, the driver can instantly take over the car. Will that really work? Let's say someone is running late, they are tired and didn't get enough sleep, so they decide to take a nap on their way to work. They could have an accident for not paying attention and falling asleep. Not only that, there are many ignorants in this world. People will also get distracted on their cell phones and ignore the alerts they are receiving. That isn't the only problem, the seats could malfunction and cause the alerts not be sent to the driver. People will not only get distracted, the alerts may not be sent on time. This can be stopped before it makes people lazy.\n\nSmart cars shouldn't be used nowhere in this world. It's not safe for anybody because other than being dangerous, there are ignorant people who can buy these cars. These ignorant people are irresposible and shouldn't even own one. It could also be put in the wrong hands, making this world less safe. I am against the development of these cars becuase they could be a danger to the world, this will only make people more lazy, and people could get distracted and not oay attention to the road.",
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"content": "The author concluds story paragraph show next spring anoter chane The author shows Saeng relate blooms hybiscus plant take test The author leave clif haber shows Saengs life still come In story Saeng trys get used change hard time Her moter holes cheer like winter comes Saeng Have next spring take divers test",
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"content": "In this modern era, few individuals think that technology has made individual life too complicated and the solution is to lead a normal life without technology. I accord with the given notion because it leads to several diseases and unemployment to folks.\r\n\r\nTo embark upon, excessive use of technology causes severe illness to individuals who use it. To evaluate it, these days a maximum number of people spend most of their time on technological appliances owing to which people dislike going outside for play or for walking. This results more in kids as children do not go outside for playing which leads to gain in weight which causes diseases like obesity and respiratory problems not only in offspring but also in adults. In other words, by playing video games on electronic devices kids get attracted to it and spend maximum time on it which leads to sitting for a longer time without any movement of the body. So, technology leads to severe difficulties for the body.\r\n\r\nIn addition to it, this leads to unemployment for individuals. To clarify , by using technical devices manpower reduces as most of the work is done by technology which causes unemployment for individuals. Also, for using ubiquitous technology skills are required which are not possible for every person. By this, many of the workers are unskilled and these unskilled workers cannot be employed for a field of career. For instance, these days multinational complexes need skilled expert employees for working on the technology. Therefore, technology leads to unemployment.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although ubiquitous technology plays a vital role in the cutting-edge era. However, it causes various difficulties like the situation of unemployment and illness as well.",
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"content": "Have you ever been on a trip to cross the Alantic Ocean? A man named luke Bomberger has, and did sixteen times. You can do this by joining the Seaging Cowboys program. By joining this program you can see famous monuments and go through the Panama Canal; you can also experince the work the cownboys used to do.\n\nJoining the this program you can see the most coolest monuments you ever seen! You can see castles and towers on your way to Europe. You may even go in them, and see the gloriuos sightings you'll ever seen in you life. This is what your going to see if you go on this program.\n\nWhen your on your way to Europe, you will go through the Panama Canel. You can see what the Peoples houses look like, how they live, and what they eat. You can also see how the canael is shaped and how it was formed. That is what is going to happen when your going through the Panama Canel.\n\nLastly, your proplably thinking its all fun and games. No, your going to work like the cowboys did in the old days. You will be feeding animals and you might be hourly reporting to the captian just like Luke Bomberger! That is all the work you will be doing on this program.\n\nAnd that concludes the program of Seaging Cowboys. Hope you can join the program and help through our journey.",
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"content": "In this day and age, young people have been struggling with the dilemma of choosing the next path upon graduating from high school. Some individuals claimed that enrolling in university or college is the perfectly decent answer to guarantee their distinguished career while other people share the belief that one should get a job right after school. Personally, I will strongly agree with former attitude.\r\nOn the one hand, it is believed that it is more advantageous for students to pursue their higher education: Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For many sectors, such as law and medicine, having a university degree is a prerequisite. In Viet Nam, a person who wants to become a doctor has to get a very good score on the entrance exam for three subjects: math, biology and chemistry. Secondly, university is about more than just a degree. It is the opportunity to learn to live by yourself, develop as a person and have the opportunity to learn more about a subject you enjoy and have a lot of fun. Rather than knowing what you want to do before you go to university, university shapes you, give you some life experience and forms your opinion of what you want to do for a job. As a result, university graduates can potentially earn more in their lifetime. Thirdly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants or one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from university or college will not be able to complete. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, taking up an occupation straight after graduating is attractive for several reasons. The first reason is that they can become dependent, and they will be able to learn how to manage their own money and even afford their own lives like their own house or start a family. In addition, working after high school allows you the opportunity to try out different fields, deciding what suits you and what does not. In terms of their career, you may progress more quickly. The chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to your chosen profession is much wider and consequently, you can get promoted soon. For example, Steve Job who was an adopted child lived in extreme poverty situation and could not attend university but by huge passion and creativity, he was still to pursue his dream and became the best CEO in the world. Another reason is that because you're entering the working world early, you have a chance to build up a network of professional contacts. These relationships can come in handy later when you need a reference or recommendation. Someone you meet at your job might also be able to introduce you to someone in your preferred career path. Or you may perform so well at your job that your employer offers a full-time, better-paying position once you complete college. However, it is true that, the common rate of poverty in a nation belonging to low qualifications people.\r\nIn general, this issue shows a controversial question about our career. Depending on the specific purpose, each one can choose the suitable chance. A job can ensure our live sustainably give us many experiences and relationships with others. Yet, it appears to me that even working right after graduation might be helpful in several situations, broadly speaking, juveniles should continue to study which is the shortest path to obtain promising jobs.",
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"content": "Computers useful people They help contact friends family world You might need typing paper school work use internet If friend family member move away computers easy way contact Phones dont always give option call around world Say bestfriend moved country could email instant message computers What want chat someone right next door even theres blizzard snow four feet computers simple way contact When friend went I used instant messaging talk Imagine work school asked write five page essay Do really want write Imagine writing hundreds newspaper everyday Typing easy solution doesnt require much work takes less time Typing also makes work lot neater easier read Not even library information need What need write article newspaper newly discovered animal A library wont immediately buy new books The internet ideal way get information moment happens What celebrity got hit bus rocket space landed sucesfully You cant expect go side country watch take notes The internet gives information anything possible The internet also allowes students take online schools classes When oldest brother couldnt take high school needed college took online class home The internet also helps find vacation spots going away home need plane train boat ticket What need rent car cant go store airport You go online purchase tickets Have ever heard someone say CAPS upon google dont know answer something I remember friend telling new dog I never even heard When I got home I went internet researched The internet useful tool everyone Going computer allows talk anyone anywhere type anything needed use internet The computer makes life little easier fun would handy tool writing newspaper",
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"content": "Many people believe that scientific research nowadays should concentrate on tackling global health issues. While others and I disagree with the idea and think that there are more vital threats. In the following paragraph, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, one of the reasons that folk say that research should focus on handling health problems is that these days, there are numerous new illnesses emerging all the time. To illustrate, Covid-19 that is spreading out currently is a disease that humans have not known before. As a result, we have to do research to invent the vaccine to deal with this disease. Moreover, individuals would like to have a longer life. In other words, at present, the average lifetime of humans is seventy years old. Therefore, If medicines and medical treatments are more enhanced, humans will have a longer life.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the obvious reason that some people believe that there are more crucial problems is that presently, there are a lot of environmental threats that affect our lives. For example, air pollution is a significant problem that has severe effects on humans because the fumes emitted from cars can cause lung disease. On top of that, engineering issue also plays an important role in our lives. That is to say, engineering development such as autonomous cars can make individuals more safe and comfortable.\r\n\r\nTo summarize, although there are tremendous reasons why folk think that research should focus only on health issues, I personally disagree with this notion and believe that there are more crucial problems.",
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"content": "The author memoir mood happiness bought New house New Jersey They born baby house Narciso years old There family happy There parents cuba They live beautiful house bedrooms In hous There familys always happy",
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"content": "\" Can you imagine a time in te future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\" From the passage that i've read they've predicted that driverless cars will first be issued around 2020 thats just 4 years away! I believe driverless cars could severely lower the percentage of an accident happening. The odds of a teenager crashing with driverless cars could go down nearly an astonishing 68%. The police force would have to watch out for distracted drivers that are on there cellular devices or even doing there make-up in the car. Would you like to see driverless cars in the future.\n\nThere are a handful of companies developing prototypes and concept cars, such as Toyota, BMW, Google, GM, Tesla and even apple has attempted at it before, but havent had as much success compared to the brands listed before apple. GM has had Computer driven cars since the 1950's. In 1950 GM created a concept car that could run on a special test track. Of course that didnt suceed due to the expenses the government would have to pay for new roads with sensors and electrical cables which was way too expensive to be practical.\n\nIn 2013, BMW created a development called \"traffic Jam Assistant.\" The car could handle driving functions of speeds up to 25 MPH. I would love to drive everyday, but i do understand when parents say it's boring after so many years you just have to change up stuff such as a new car. Why would anyone want a driverless car? It would be interesting to show off your driverless new car, but in the end everyone would get bored just sitting in the drivers seat while the car takes you wherever you want to go. Even if a driverless car was created certain states wouldn't let you drive it on their roads. In states such as California, Nevada, and even Florida doesnt allow people to test a computer driven car without a human driver at the wheel. Would you want a driverless car to take you everywhere?\n\nTesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Back in the 1950's none of this was possible without costing millions of dollars just for a simple car now that we have all the sensors the prices of that manufacturing rates will go down if we ever continue are dream of creating a driverless car. in the 1980's, automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of the antilock brakes. Antilock brakes have helped prevent millions of accidents in our world today that could have led to thousands of deaths. So do you believe we should keep on striving for driverless cars.",
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"content": "Ok I see where this article is coming from with the FACS technology,but if you think about it,theres some people out there who probably wouldn't want to be read about there emotions.\n\nRealy if you think about it what do people gain from this technology. In the article it talks about how you can tell by the look of peoples faces you can tell how that friend is feeling. If a person can tell how someone is feeling just by the way they look then what is the point of this tecnology. Also in the article it gives you a number of steps to do while looking in the mirror in paragraph 7,but all of those steps are thing they people can detect already from other people instead of a the FACS techgnology.\n\nSome things are useful in this tecnology,but its just really doesn't show any value on how this can effect other people. This tecnology is really just to show you there emotion,nut in reality ask your self what can you do depending on what ther emotions are showing, for the person who is feeling this way? So in my conclusion this technology to read the emtional exspressions of students in the classroom is not valuable.",
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"content": "In todays day age computers key part business education recreation benefit society First get better education learning also great way communicate people Finally even teacher handeye coordination could use everyday life My first point get better education using For example textbooks use social studies school still refers Computers great way get uptodate information world With outdated textbooks school number one recourse get information eighth grade teacher With computers learn far away places without learing comfort home In addition getting great education computers eyelent form communication I remember I grade father across world business trip Our phones could nt call long distance relied computers communicate This helped get father s absence When use computer communicate also saving money You save year When use communicate cell phone electronics expert Finally use computer increas handeye coordination With typing key board hand dexterity increases second In fact PERCENT computer users coordinated throught day opposed people nt computer recent pole times And day age handeye coordiantion neccesity Besides would nt like ability hands work without look So see computers would benifit society everyone uses They great benifit need education buisness Thank listenging",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System is a great idea for students to use. With technology advancing so much it is essential for the school assignments to advance along with it. This technology is the next step for students and teachers alike. The FACS should read the facial expressions of students because it could keep students engaged, and addresses whether or not they understand the subject.\n\nThe FACS is able to keep the student from getting bored. While working on the computer for so long a student can easily get bored and tune out the lesson. The FACS though, can use its technology to make the content more engaging; like making \"computer animated faces more expressive\" (D'Alto). By making faces and other aspects of the lesson more interesting students have a higher chance of keeping their interest in the lesson. This is just one example of how useful the Facial Action Coding System could be for the students outside of class.\n\nThe FACS also would tell when the student is struggling or is confused with the material. Normally in a class setting a student can ask a teacher for help, but it is not that simple on the computer. Instead of the student continuing to not understand the work the system \"could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (D'Alto). This way the student can be sure to get the correct information and not miss out on anything from lack of understanding. This is another reason as to why the FACS would be a great tool for the learners.\n\nTo close, the FACS is the right step for helping students. Not only does it keep them interested in the lesson, but also helps when the student is confused. This technology can be beneficial to students and teachers because of all of the usefull features that it offers. Since \"most human communication is nonverbal, including emotiuonal communication...computers need to understand that too\" to fully utilize the technology that is available to help the children learn.",
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"content": "Social people think laughter way showing feel almost like emotion I look laughter different way Laughter form communication Sure laugh something funny truth control So people laugh They laugh convey message basically letting know said amusing Overtime laughter build relationships even start someone laughs sharing common ground I know laughter important thing life without I would never met best friend When I began sixth grade I scared I scared I would lose old friends become one kids sits alone cafeteria every day wishing someone eat greasy pizza Of course I overreacting thought always lingering mind first days Soon I even began notice friends actually find new people hang I beginning feel though I becoming outcast I feared Then I met He skater kid dark hair past eyes white almost pale skin I one friends I saw riding around near front school I nt really think much besides fact coolest shoes I ever seen I actually surprised walked started talk like known forever I walked avoid image outcast As soon standing front says something like insult I would usually brush nothing time reason made really mad I said things back I knew verbal warfare In end I knew one thing I hated kid hated Towards middle year school dance It first dance I ever I butterfly s stomach I got ride one old friends I liked never judgmental anything like friendly When car driving middle school told pick else nt really bother got house The house nt impressive could cardboard box I cared When saw kid s left foot step house I knew exactly s shoe As got car I pretended I nt seen I failed The whole car ride nothing awkward When got dance I walked right side avoid confrontation scenced tension stopped walking What said next surprised little CAPS nt guys get along We stood eyes locked skater kid made another one nice comments I thought going beginning year I something I nt expect I laughed He laughed It almost first time ever friends The whole night hung danced like crazy We become friends During rest year became better better friends We went eachother s houses hung school That I realized best friends Even ninth grade still best friends It s crazy one small giggle escalate s happened I nt know laughter I even laughed night one thing certain laughter important",
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"content": "There are many reasons why people are against the development of these cars. The driver could either be safe or in lots of danger. In many states, it is illegal to even test computer-driven cars. Due to the horrifying events that have happened, and the excitements, cars with no individual handling it should have unauthorized privledge to be used. Having laws changed for this style of car can cause a lot of negativity, more money spent, and less to-do things for humans.\n\nSeveral people have different standards for this technical car. In many states, it is illegal to even test computer drive these cars due to accidents and other laws. In the passage is states, \"new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident\". This means that there will be different charges pressed if the individual has an accident. There are also laws for who it is to be blamed for the car accident. The quote states, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?\". It states that either or neither person is to blame, which will cost the car a fortune to refund.\n\nTalking about money, many people won't be able to afford or even take it for a nice test drive. The quote stated, \"Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundreed million dollars\". This requires at least a rich wealthy family or made of money individual. This is not just something you can buy at any particualr dealership or store. An example for this is, \"it wasn't something you could buy at radio Shack, so just how driverless will the cars be in the future?\". This provides a perfect example for Google Car project to rethink about wasting millions of dollars on a hopeless dream. How will lower class and middle class of society be able to afford this new invention? They won't be.\n\nMaking humans do less and less for the world provides lazyness and waste of time. This new model of car makes the car do most of the work and provides cameras ro keep watch. In the paragraph it quotes, \"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver\". This could provide positivity but negativity could be involved also by making the car stop by itself or drive by itself by mistake. There could be a technical failure and the car could breakdown when in need. Which brings me to the last point, \"This means the human driver must remian alert and be ready to take over when the situtaion requires\". This could make the driver nervous or unsteady at times, which is never a good place to be in when driving a vehicle.\n\nThese have all made good points of rethinking whether driverless cars are a positive or negative influence in the world. Buying one of these cars could cost a fortune and accidents could cause to several charges. Buying these cars can make an individual less likely to want to drive a car at all. Two million dollar should not be spent on an unaffordable object. Staying with manual cars could be the key to success and saving money for other new inventions.",
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"content": "Education plays a vital role in the development of a country. Therefore, some people think that the education system is the only important factor to the development of a country and they may be right.Education is the foundation of developed society. It is rightly said, ‘education is a ladder success’. If all the people of any country are educated then they becomes broadminded, civilized and progressive. An educated society improves the standard of life as well., education also creates a good employment opportunity and therefore country does not have to suffer from big problems like unemployment. Educated peoples are more aware of such as pollution and many more. A country becomes technologically advanced because of educated people.Not only this, but also by giving importance to education, the nations can get rid of problems like , poverty, unemployment and population growth that delay the progress of a nation. The crime rate can also be kept under . The standard of living of the people will go up. If the nations to be progressive it is very important that the people are more educated and progressive. Any country can become more technologically advanced and developed because of education.However, there are other factors that also play an important role in the development of a country. Such as governments have to encouraged people to do soIn conclusion, I would like to say that a good education system will lead to a developed country.",
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"content": "The author is definetley fond of studying Venus and different ways to get there. The author goes into detail on how Venus is a very different but at the same time similar to Earth's atmosphere. The problem is that there has not been a single succesful mission to Venus, which means scientists have no concrete evidence that humans can survive there.\n\nThe author stated, \"More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anyhting else, from a distance\"(6). This is very important because if the scientists can not take samples then no one will be able to figure out if humans could actually survive on Venus. The sooner scientists get to test the surface of Venus, the sooner humans will find out if they are able to live on Venus in the future. Venus is similar to Earth for a few reassons for example, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth\"(4). This quote is discussing that Venus was once the most Earth like planet because they both had very similar atmospheres and features. As the quote mentioned Venus was covered largely with oceans, Earth is 70% + covered in ocean. If signs of life on Earth are possible from having many oceans it is logical to predict that Venus had life in it's oceans at one time.\n\nIn conclusion, It is still a problem that there has not been one succesful mission to Venus, resulting in scientists having no concrete evidence that humans could survive on Venus in the future. Once there is an invention that allows scientists to get to Venus's surface and take samples. It will be a quick process from there to find out if humans can survive on Venus's atmosphere. The fact that scientists have found that Venus once had a lot of space covered in oceans. This can help one predict that there was also some living organisms on Venus's surface. If the conditions are still the same scientists could test the area to figure out if it would be possible for humans to live there in the future.",
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"content": "There is no denying fact that the phenomenon of social media, which people use every day for keep connect with people and news is ubiquitous across the globe due to its paramount important. Although they have a plethora of merits yet numerous demerits are also there which will be elaborated in upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nInitiating with the best possible benefits that the most significant advantage is due to social media people become more socia and they updated with events that happened around. Along with it, Not only the bonding improve beween individuals but also the trust, understanding and faithfulness increase, which leads to decline hasitation. Due to the social media the knowledge increases in various sectors like economic, sports and politics. these factors can not be ignored.\r\n\r\nOn the paradoxical side, there are many drawbacks as well, First and foremost people can easily treps due to illegal activity and frauds, which leads to some fear among the people towards social media. In addition, A plethora of fake news can smoothly share on social sites, as a consequence, the probability of untrust and kindness can decreases. For instance, in the contemporary era, it's hard to find a jenuine person on social media.\r\n\r\nIn recapitulation, I would like reiterate that though due media have disadvantages such as fraud, illigal activity and moking but the proportion of negative activity is very less on social media, the advantage are too many to be ignored.",
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"content": "I am usually a bit skeptical about new technologies like the Facial Action Coding System, but I am opened to the idea of new technology. In this case I support the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions. It is pretty interesting how the Facial Action Coding System (FACS) can determine the emotion someone is feeling by examining the muscle movements in the face. The FACS could be a very usefull tool in many ways in the near future.\n\nThe FACS uses facial movents to determine whether a person is feeling happy, sad, surpised, angry, disgusted, fearful, or sad. The interesting thing about the FACS is that it can determine whether the person is faking an emotion. For example, the article stated,\" But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius\". So by examining muscle movements in the face, the FACS can determine whether the person is faking an emotion or actually feeling it. In the future I think therapist could use the FACS to help determine how his/her patent is actually feeling. Dr. Huang stated,\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts.\"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". I think that this would be an effective way to futher advance eduction in our society.\n\nIn conclusion, I agree with the use of the Facial Action Coding System. I believe it will help us advance as a society and make things less dificult. I feel as if the technology could be used in many ways besides schools. Many professions, such as pyscologist could use this technology.",
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"content": "Some people think that it is of crucial importance to keep both home and workplace tidy and clutterless. I strongly agree with the statement mentioned above, as it helps one in saving time and money. Also, it helps in leaving a long-lasting impression on the people around them.\nKeeping things clean and well-organized in both personal and professional lives can help one in keeping track of them. This, in turn, facilitates one in saving time, especially in crunch situations where one needs to act promptly. Morning is an excellent example of such situations when people usually to go to work. Disorganized people spend several minutes in finding essential items like keys, wallet and mobile phone, thereby wasting valuable time. In many cases, the items are never found, leading to further frustration, as it results in the loss of money, apart from time.\nIn addition, keeping things tidy and clutter-free at both home and in the office provides one with a chance of leaving a long-lasting impression on others. The qualities, as mentioned earlier, are always linked to one’s personality, which is continuously being judged by others. Neighbors and workplace colleagues always feel attracted to one that keeps their personal belongings clean and in an orderly fashion. Based on such good qualities, one might be able to establish good terms with the surrounding neighbors or with bosses, eventually helping them succeed in both personal and professional lives.\nIn conclusion, keeping belongings organized and neat saves one time and money. Besides, it also opens new doors for one to establish better relationships in both personal and professional capacities.",
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"content": "The landform is clearly not from ancient origin in the enhanced picture of the mesa. It is way too cold for life to exist on Mars or civilization to thrive. Mars has no food, no water, and the climate is harsh most of the time.\n\nThere is no oxygen on Mars and there is no way to survive without special equipment. If aliens did exist why would they settle for Mars and not Earth. It is most likely just a natural landform that coincidentally looks like a face. Images show that with enhanced graphics the landform looks nothing like a face.\n\nThere are different landforms on Earth that look like faces too. Even if there were ancient structures in Mars they probably were destroyed by the intense storms that happen every day on Mars. Its unlikely that there were aliens that the mesa is from ancient origin considering we don't have proof of aliens yet.",
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"content": "It is true that growing business and cultural contacts are part of the modern process of globalisation. While some people mourn the loss of national identity which they believe occurs as a result of this process, I disagree with that view on the basis that it is important to embrace change and accept new realities. \nThe expansion of business and cultural exchanges across the world is a positive feature of contemporary life. Companies have broken into new markets by doing market research and taking into consideration local differences in consumer demands and preferences. They introduce new products without dismissing traditional ideas. The appearance, for example, of McDonald’s fast food outlets in Malaysia, China or Vietnam is not incompatible with the success of restaurants serving time-honoured cuisine. Such innovations do not necessarily mark the disappearance of traditional ways of life and to accept new customs is to extend choice for every consumer. \nThus, it is an exaggeration to maintain that these developments will lead to the loss of a strong sense of identity in countries. For example, people in many former colonial nations have embraced change, but they still proudly preserve traditional cultural traits. In India, English - the language of the former colonial power - is widely spoken, but this has not led to the disappearance of local languages or indigenous cultural practices. Therefore, joining modern culture does not always mean that national or local customs have to be abandoned. On the contrary, enforced isolation from trade and cultural contacts with other countries will have the inevitable consequence of withdrawal from all the changes taking place globally. \nIn conclusion, I would argue that the growth of contacts in commerce and culture is a positive development which will not destroy national identities.",
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"content": "If you look at your everyday life style everything is pretty much computerized. Everything from how you wake up in the moring from your phone alarm all the way to the computers at school or work. Everyting is technolgy based here lately. Have you ever though about driverless cars?\n\nDriverless cars are coming sooner then you think. Google founder Sergey Brin envisions a future where the driver of a car is no longer the driver. You may be thinking wow a driverless car that must be crazy! How would that happen you may ask? Well, Toyota Prius uses a postion-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an interial motion sensor. All that sounds pretty confusing to me.\n\nDriverless cars were not even though way before 2000. The sensors weren't there, the computers weren't there, and the mapping wasnt there. Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost over 1.5 million dollars.\n\nYou're still probaby thinking theres no way I would want a driverless car. They are way safer then you think. They will most likely be here in the near future. The road to the turly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination every day.",
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"content": "In our world today, contribution to the public constitution is oblidge by many people and they suggest that this money will go to the health care. In this statement I will agree and I have two reasons with this; less stress and people could work joyfully wi\r\n\r\nHealth is wealth they say, thats why we need to take it seriously in the first place. They would prioritize",
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"content": "Nowadays, people are growing interested in the history of the accommodation they live in. This trend is mainly due to a business agenda for housing purposes and personal beliefs. Thanks to technological advances like the Internet that makes researching such information become easy.\r\n\r\nThere are a few reasons that make people start to search about the place where they live. Firstly, having particular knowledge about the building or the house can help in increasing the house value in the housing business. To illustrate, many customers are extremely into the history and fond of a certain type of building. Being able to explain and create a background story about the accommodation can potentially help the housing agency to win a negotiation with such clients. Another reason is that many people have certain spiritual beliefs that they adhere to. People, for example, believe that living in a house which had a history of a serious crime such as murderer, will result in bad fortune. As a result, searching for information behind the house will ease their decision whether they should stay in that place or not.\r\n\r\nThere are a number of ways to research such history. The first way is through asking neighbours or local people as they usually have some information about the area or the houses nearby. However, reaching from the internet via a search engine probably is the easiest and most accessible way since it contains most data about pretty much everything. Moreover, as most historical information is being updated regularly, it becomes very convenient to use this platform to find an up-to-date history about places.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, more people have become interested in the history of their accommodation because of business in housing and personal beliefs, and they can easily get that information from the Internet or from local neighbours.",
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"content": "I think good enough Minfong HoThrough story feel somewhat happy somewhat sad always calmYou feel happy talking plants mother accepts plants bought At first think mom going yell buying failed testYou feel bad still calm mood show girl want give take time",
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"content": "In our society, technology is advancing significantly by the day. What was once a letter that took 10-day trip overseas to its appropriate destination is now just a simple text message that reaches a person within seconds. The automobile is an innovation that has also advanced dramatically, enough to the point where almost every person who can afford to have one does because of its necessity when transportation becomes a factor. The idea of a car becoming \"driverless\" is simply another boost in the technology available to cars today, as discussed in \"Driverless Cars are Coming.\" Due to its many benefits, driverless cars are a positive additon to our society.\n\nDriverless cars offer a multitude of benefits for any passengers that might use them for transportation. For one, the necessity to have to buy or pay off a car would essentially cease to exist. If computer-operated vehicles were capable of driving in all areas, then what would the need for having your own car be? Even if the car wasn't \"fully automated\" and the driver would have to take over at some point, the less work you have to do, the more time you have to work on something else. The article addresses this topic \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\" The biggest asset that the consumer gains from a driverless car is time, while still being transported in a safe and reliable vehicle. This reinforces the advantages available to consumers who use a driverless car.\n\nSpeaking of safety, there is not a vehicle more safe than one that is more or less \"automatic.\" With autmoated cars, drivers will be able to transport themselves without having to add the extra element of driving into a day that might be stressful. However, not all cars are fully capable to driving themselves yet without driver assistance. The good news? This innovation still grants a tremendous amount of safety to the driver in charge. The features previously cited as being used as tiem fillers can also be quickly changed to inform the driver that they need to take over: \"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over.\" An advantage to this approach is that if all communication and distractions from within the car is shut down, then the driver has no choice but to focus on the road, another argument for the push of driverless cars.\n\nThe last topic at hand with these types of vehicles skims along the lines of controversial. Liability is a very integral part of the car industry, accidents will always be an issue, as cited by the article: \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" Would smarter cars help this problem? First off, it's important to acknowledge that accidents happen on the open road every day, with the primary cause being mistakes that drivers make. Therefore, manual vechicles are not necessairily dangerous, but are not as reliable as an automatic vehicle. Think about other practical additions that help consumers, such as a lifeguard on a beach. If they weren't there, would we be as safe? Probably not. Therefore, if the addition of driverless cars ensures that a safer option is available, then it only makes sense that the advantage should be taken.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars have brought about many new benefits in our society. From their ease of access to consumers to the top level of safety features that are sure to be made available in them, they will clearly become the top option of vehicle to use in our society once enough of them are made. This technological innovation is capable of doing many wonders in the automotive industry.",
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"content": "To the fact,parents are the first teachers to their kids.it is commonly believed that storytelling by parents is really important.Whilst,others argue that reading books and watching television can be done by the younger generation and parental intervention is not required.In this essay,I am going to discuss both views and share my personal opinion.\r\n\r\nParents are the first persons who spend more time with children than anyone else.So,during the course of childhood,if parents are telling the stories taking some time out from their other work,children will be motivated towards the good manners and they will carry it when they grow.As we know,the first impression is the best impression.Furthermore,apart from morality,the bond between the parents and children will become very strong which creates a lot of positivity in the children.For example,students who spent their childhood with parents behave well in school and on the other hand,youngers who did not spend their time with their parents act oddly.\r\n\r\nIt is also argued that,nowadays,children are capable enough to manage their work,including,reading books,watching television of their choices like cartoons or movies.If the parental impact is missing then it may lead to several negative ways on the children.In other words,children give more importance to television to parents.For an instance,a past survey,reveals that more than 60 per cent of children prefer to spend their time in front of the television by enjoying their favourite program than seeing their mother or father.\r\n\r\nIn a conclusion,parents killing time with the children is very important for their children personal growth rather than allowing them to do their activities of their own.It is also suggested that the more time parents spend with children in teaching them stories,the more good manners their children learn.",
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"content": "In this story, Luke Bomberger was a Seagoing Cowboy who helped people during World War ll. Other people should participate in being a Seagoing Cowboy for a couple of reasons. Read this article on why more people should sign up for Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nFirst of all, many countries in Europe were left in ruins and needed help. The countries are in need of their food supplies, animals, and more. With the help of more men, those needed supplies could be delievered with ease.\n\nAlong with all the hard work, there is also some fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games are also other activities that they enjoyed.\n\nEven with everything the Seagoing Cowboys do, they are grateful for the opportunity. Besides helping people, the cowboys had the side benefit of seeing some beautiful countries. It also made the cowboys aware of people in other countries and their needs.\n\nIn conclusion, that is why more people should sign up for the Seagoing Cowboys program. There are people in need, there is some fun on the board, and then there's the side benefit of seeing countries in or near Europe. Someday, maybe even you will be interested in joining the Seagoing Cowboys.",
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"content": "My name views censorship libraries material found offensive take shelves I never came across material offensive maybe someone else really offended I m type person would start argument type person speak whats mind tell believe People concerned libraries take certain kinds books books left shelves anyone else I say places buy books beside libraries stores etc Like said never came across book think pulled shelf course nt read whole lot either books read never came crossed terrible Books like people kill people get pregnant pulled shelves child library shouldnt even adult book section anyways kids book section I never heard kid book terrible pulled shelf Most authors smarter least would hope Music whole story self In opinon nt want kids listen adult music nt let I know lot music bad would never let children listen know well enough nt want listen m going play around I grew around rap music thats listen kids know able listen wont able listen Movies one problem libraries places book stores put movies EVERYONE see nt matter s cover s called Now movies bad covers bad titles could pulled shelves CAPS movies The name movies nt bad movie self child see even shelves kids see want watch Magazines etc nt big problem libraries nt bad ones book stores playboy play girl usually put back back behind magazines children ca nt see adults The way child would see point I think ve said say opinions experiences books music movies magazines libraries nt pulled shelves I hav nt lot experience maybe s nt kids yet guess find kids I happy explain experiences opinions people really care want know",
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"content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. First of all, it is one of the brightest ponts of light. Secondly, Venus is a close planet to Earth in terms of density, size, and distance. Lastly, a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide covers Venus. No wonder Venus is a beauty, but a challenge!\n\nFirst, Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. However, this nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun.\n\nNext, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus.\n\nFinally, a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus' atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\n\nIn conclusion, studying Venus is a worthy pursuit, even with dangers. Venus is indeed one of bightest points of light during the night. It is close to Earth in terms of density, size, and distance. Also, thick atmospheres of nearly 97 precent of carbon dioxide covers Venus. Venus is indeed an excellent planet!",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author puts that, Venus is sometimes called \"Evening Star,\" even though the nickname is misleading since Venus is a planet and is the second planet closest to the sun. Even though you can simply see Venus from distant but safe vantage point from Earth, Venus is often reffered to as Earth's \"twin.\" Earth, Venus, and Mars orbit aroung the sun at different speeds, we have sent spacecrafts to Venus but they have only survived a few hours because, Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide, the temperature is 800 Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what humans experience on Earth, conditions are far more extreme than what humans encounter on Earth. Venus's reputation ischallenging for humans to study, despite its proximity to us, the National Aerinautics and Space Administration had one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. In the text it says, \"NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers.\" It talks about how just imagining exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin, by comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. In the last paragraph it says,\"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" The author says in the last sentence of the last paragraph that, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" So, it says thay we should not let our imagination and curiosity be limited by dangers and doubts of everything else in and out of this world. And that Venus is very interesting because of the atmospheric pressure and the temperature and the atmosphere, and how Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for us to study. And that NASA is working on other approaches to study this planet by sending humans or making technology that can be more resistant to acid or heat capable of melting tin. In paragraph seven it says,\"These deviceswere firstenvisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II. The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and don not require electronics at all.\" \"Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it come to extreme physical conditions.\" In paragraph six it says, \"However, peering t Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely ffar above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" \"More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rocks, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientist seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledgeof Venus.\" That is why NASA is trying to make technology nore resistant to Venus's atmosphere so when or if they send humans up they can use that technology to observe and report back to scientist. Therefore, the author believes that it would be worth it to study Venus despite all the dangers to it.",
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"content": "What would world laughter Everyday everyone smiles laughs It makes person feel better Laughing healthy drug affects people best There many times life I needed laugh All I wanted someone make smile bring spirits I example I moved high school I felt totally alone I knew nobody nobody help feel less alone I wanted friendly face smile talk The whole hours new school dreadful When waiting mom come get I hating new life CAPS one talked first day one talk kept passing mind I remembered everyday school walking home group friends would tease say something stupid We always laughing happy As I sitting waiting mom I heard name called familiar voice As I looked I found friends sticking heads moms car window waving Seeing school barely got tons teenagers still I exclaimed My unhappy thoughts disappeared I smiling I could feel people starring friends got car give hug For reason I nt care I cared able smile truly happy closest friends I grabbed purse ran give hugs They missed two classes come pick school My mom told unhappy I I needed friendly face She could nt right After hugs smiles laughs exchanged friend said classic line CAPS one could help laugh even mom broke smile When getting car I forgot bad day horrible I felt I forgot badly I wanted friends make feel When actually came I could nt happier My life felt great school great I made great friends three buddies reminded I pushed They made laugh I smiled new high school people open welcoming It nt long I able go school smile laugh everyday Friends great influence life remind smile great laugh Laughing truth happiness I would say It smiling laughing I made new friends another great high school life Laughing brought people made seem like friendly fun person I I see laughing cure unhappiness",
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"content": "My position on driverless cars are that they are really dangerous. They would cause many safey concerns because we all\n\nknow that techology fails more times that than we want it to. Anything could happen. The text states that the car does not know traffic and that if a person does not guide it then there could be an accident. Someone could fall asleep thinking that the car can take care of itself. Even though they could be thinging that, the car could be heading for a cliff or a ditch. The car mgiht be labled as a smart car, but it does not have a mind of its own.\n\nThe text states the car can only handle driving functions at 25 mph. This will make it hard for people trying to get to where they need to go, only if they are depending on the driverless car. It is really pointless because no matter what , you still have to watch what the car is doing at all times. So we might as well drive a car oursleves. I agree on driverless cars only if the driver is alert a all times. With new technology today, people wlll most likely be on there phones while in the car or doing something that does not demonstrate good safety habbits.",
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"content": "The challenge if exploring venus is that you can learn alot of stuff. Like while venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth , it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely , Or maybe we should think of them as challenges as all in one team or group. Now each previous mission was unmanned, and fro good reason,since, no spacecraft survived the landing fro more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explain's why not a singel spaceship has touched down on venus un more than three decades. And numerous factore contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite it's promity to us.\n\nEven more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuic acid in venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, Temperature's average over 800 degree's fahrenheit, And the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on own planet now you really have to study this stuff so you can know about it. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. theses devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in teh 1940s during world war ll .\n\nNot easy conditions, but survivable fro humans. However, peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photograpy and videography ineffective. Most importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anythign else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to condut a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nMy conclusion is thats you need to star doing research on the earth in where yall stay at and things about the world that you do not know about , Or go out on trips in see new things or meeet new people . If you explore the world you will get to do these things or research is good it give you alot of information.",
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"content": "STOP... And Think About what you are Doing!\n\nEver wonder why inventors want to come up with rediculous inventions. Well Google has just decided that they want to invent a car that drives on its own. There are so many things that can go wrong with a car driving on its own. It's completly dangerous for yourself and others. Laws will have to be change. Other people that are driving safe could get hurt because you are not not driving.\n\nThere are a lot of cons that goes into letting cars drive on there own while you don't have to. You can cause more accidents. Also the techology could crash down and won't work anymore, so what do you do after that? People will have to be more cautious on the road because your car can cause a lot more accidents.\n\nThe Laws will have to change for driving. In paragraph 9, it says that, \" new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in case of an accident. If technology fail and someones is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" It would be difficult to say whos fault it is when you crash into another car. Because people might blame you for the wreck because you're in the drivers seat and you're still suppose to pay attention on the road, even if you aren't driving. The law will have to figure out who to blame.\n\nThe inventors also have to think about other people saftey. If something goes wrong with your car, they could get hurt. Other peoples lives matter, you can't just be texting and think that your car can manage on its own because it stills need you to hold onto the wheel. Anything could happen to the car and you don't want somebody else getting injured.\n\nBefore you get a car that drives on its own, think about the dangers it can do. Also the law will have to make changes just for cars that drives on its own. You will also have to watch out for other people because your car isn't completly safe to drive on its own, in paragraph 7, it says that the car still needs somebody in the car in case of an accident up ahead so you can drive .Think before you get a car that can take a way a persons life and yours.",
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"content": "Nowadays, universities are accepting all the students, as many men as women in every subject matter. I believe that being open to all students is fair. The university must allow everyone to study what is interesting for each individual, regardless of gender.\nHowever, I think that the numbers of equality in each course are statistically speaking unrealistic. Even though, in general, I completely agree that there must be equality and human rights.\nNowadays, many are the organizations created, to support equality, sex discrimination, with the aim of helping people to get their rights. However, despite enormous positive changes compared to the past, still, some people reckon that some jobs are for women and others for men. What does it even mean? Should a woman only do house chores and raise kids? As can be seen, based on women's experience, a woman can be a businesswoman and a great mother at the same time. There is an old saying, 'Give me an educated mother and I will give you an educated nation'. Therefore, I disagree with some people's beliefs. Men and women can be great in different jobs and positions.\nHowever, having the same number of students in each course is impractical for universities. Realistically speaking, there are some courses which attract more one gender than the other. In terms of numbers, if we think that, for instance, in the nursery degree there is 50 % of females and, then the other half will be waiting to be filled form males, it would be harsh for the university to close the course with the same parity of future students.\nIn a nutshell, universities should not accept only one gender for a particular course or most of that gender with a fixed number. As the applications arrive at the university, they should select people based on their skills, knowledge, and merits. No matter if the course will be 80% females and 20% male or vice versa.",
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"content": "\"Why Driveless Cars Are Not Safe?\"\n\nI believe that driveless cars should not be developed because these cars are not safe, they're not developed completely, and if the driver is not taking caution it can cause harm to other.\n\nMy first reason why I believe that driveless cars should not be developed is that they are not safe because sometimes it requires human skills when going through work zones or accidents. If the driver is not alert and is sleeping and the driveless cars notices a work zone or accident the driver is not going to know. Right now the traffic laws have written that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. Driveless cars are illegal in most states because of safety precautions. Even if they were legal the trafic laws would have to make new laws to cover liability in care of accidents.\n\nMy second reason why I believe that driveless cars should not be developed is that driveless cars are not developed completely. The car driveless car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but alll driveless cars are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead of them requires human skills. Since they arent not developed completely the driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when they there is a situation that requires human skills. The cars can be driven more than half a million miles without crashing, but the Google cars are really driveless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or with complicated traffic issues.\n\nFinally, my third reason why I believe that driveless cars should not be developed is that if the driver is not taking caution they could cause harm to other people. If the driver sleeping and not paying attention to the road even though it is a driveless car it could cause harm to the driver and other people. Since the driveless cars are not fully developed the driver has to make sure that they are staying alert. Even though it might have a sensor in the car what if it sensor fails then how will the driver be alert that a traffic situation is ahead. Right now the traffic laws say the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. Also driveless cars are illegal in most states and its also illegal even to test computer driven cars.\n\nThese are the reason why I believe that driveless cars are not to developed because they are not safe, they are not developed completely, and if the driver is not taking caution they could cause harm to other people.",
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"content": "There many obstacles builders mast attempting allow dirigibles dock laws nature overlooked detail Laws obstacle safety risks dirigible densely populated area Hindenburg accident Nature problem violent winds top mast would make ship unsteady The last obstacle builders mast overlooked obstacles safety risks",
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"content": "In this modern era, many business man would like to start international business in order to people are gotten more benefit. However, a fair amount of people think that the expanding business and cultural contact between nations gives many positive effects while others say that this trend causes the loss of national identities. Viewing from a general perspective, the essay discusses both viewpints, I personally agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are many advantages will come when the country will collaborate withtin another country in many ways such as business and cultural. Firstly, the job opportunity are dramatically increased in order to both the countries citizens are gotten benefit. Secondly, they are allowed to use them own country resources while the government are obtained huge tax from business human as a result these kinds of activities is one of the reason for nation improvements. For example, many developed countries are minkled to stard marketing who developing countries such as India as a result an Indian folks are gotten many work from these companies.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, this situations are brought more effects for loss of state uniqueness irrefutably. This trend will continue while the state will never have a chance to develop because beetween countries are always need to collaborate in any circumstances as a result many foreigners are gotten employment cpmpared to local state human. For instance,a recend survey said that many underdeveloped nations are suffered to this plan in form to they are lost their original uniqueness.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, undoubtedly this project is brought both positive as well negative. Nevertheless, In my opinion about this plan gets more advantages to the both countries when they are being collobrated to do marketing and other events too as a result automatically both territory as well as the individuals financial status will improve dramatically.",
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"content": "Book I think removing certain materials books music movies andor magazines choice I always thought part constitutional right I read alot urban books s I enjoy They realae towhere I I going life No kinds books I would read grand childern choose later life also enjoy urban books movies You enjoy reading materials I enjoy either nt mean banned There alot books movies I nt care I would nt ask banned If everyone started nt like would nt need movies libraries book stores Kids would nt future would nt know came bad bad next person When go library book store already idea looking If books appropreiate kids section reads For We parents We one s control kids read watch I nt think materials would make problem go away kids days want bad enough figure away read watch anyway Ann",
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"content": "Every author intended audience writing book write think appropriate certain audience Unfortunately sometimes people intended read book actually read even though something supposed reading When author writes childrens book meant child read adult Also author writes romance novel meant people comprehend authr talking act maturely reading Although novels appropriate certain people censorship libraries way fix big mistake As humans given certain freedoms one freedoms freedom press Authors able write whatever choose write If choose write subject s appropriate age groups still right books libraries Even though everyone nt supposed read certain people If take books away scared child might get ahold one taking away certain people enjoy reading Due fact different books intended different age groups libraries different sections filled variety authors They children s section made primarily children adult section books adults supposed read teen section everyone By sections within libraries trying keep people reading intended read without censoring taking away people s favorite books Having sections libraries happy medium letting anyone read whatever book would like matter inappropriate cutting certain books together If person adult allowed go library get whatever type book magazine music movie want If kid s parent okay checking looking certain things nt matter anyone else think material offensive Instead censoring movies books magazines music libraries certain age someone come without parent check whatever would like If person age parents present check approve child checking Censorship libraries ultimately pointless nt even considered Whether people find certain material offensive ways get material really point censoring anything libraries",
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"content": "In library certain materials books music movies magazines etc removed shelves found offensive Many people feel upset find book magazine type material inappropiate anyone seehear Inappropiate material commonly referred pictures words offend people The words songs offensive Talking girls disrespectful ways music offend girls listeners Pictures also offensive many ways sex race violence I believe book music movies magazines upset stay away section material particular If library see kids mainly stay kids section anyways re adult mature enough ignore bothers I library times life When I search im looking I ignore offends upsets In library certain materials books music movies magazines etc removed shelves found offensive My answer reasons I listed People mature enough stay away let offensive materials library get",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper I think computers one best things ever created They allow talk people far away places help learn career education choises able learn many subjects Computers help society hurt shouldny use With talk people around world space matter You might know hut communications world need There kind anyone could go though There satalites orbit planet space proffesor told students A lot every day items rars phones use kind computers let people communicate In addition letting people communicate help millions people make educational career choises Most kids go college nt know lot colleges When sister picking college wanted go nt know one choose She sat looked hundred schools narrowing made decision picked never even heard couple months ago People type situation time survey taken students see wanted career rest week students got experience diffrent carrer options students picked different carrer one week Have ever heard old aget CAPS power well true computers great source many different subjects math science history language much much people using francisco national debate Said CAPS great tool used properly includes looking new places math even comunicating computers used unhealthy games You learn many new places In grade teacher everyone areport country friend found place never heard found onts information us main income exports resorts fun activities After reading facts surely one would agree great tool used It lots people communicate helps educational decisions learn many subjects math science language I strongly believe people use",
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"content": "Censorship libraries gotten strict making next generation miss key lessons learned life How would feel went library adult would able check childrens books magazines music Now know thats little extreme seriousness without knowledge Where would books magazines music left No libraries means knowledge books life lessons imagination excitement would deevolve back animallike state actuality humans one thing given us power become advanced smart brains There quote live life went like if knowledge power books must means getting power From knowledge views world give argument censorships effect libraries Censorship think americans say censorship I think bad thing like cuss words nudity battle scenes The thing displayed different ways music example music censored would rap go ahead get explicit version rap song sometimes might already bad enough I personnely nt like rap opinion biased I like rock metal music people like music takes away freedom nt like saying nt listen Another subject intrest talk censorship issues magazines We point seen learned naughty magazines like playboy Now im making sure type magazines stay school libraries public libraries adult sections might put playboys stuff like hunting magazines hot rod magazines line adult sections shelves The last thing subjected rather extreme censorship books Lets honest favorite book little grew One book absolute classic The currently removed like one two cuss words I mean really people great book first sign cuss word everbody starts shouting burn Now many following generations never get read classic people took libraries feel people learn relax andnot fret one two cuss words apparenly takes ruin great book So whats final conclusion first amendment right free speech censorship much censorship meet Apparently libraries one ca nt read wood craftmanship listen music involves cuss words In personnel opinion think adults section uncensored teens censorship things like nudity children well right subject censorship needed So ask one grades essay stop think open mind long hide children grandchildren form real world In real world things deamed acceptable nt exceptable would nt begin Truly decide take classics like lose knowledge story lose freedom",
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"content": "MOO! There are many animals a seagoing cowboy has to care for and deliver.\n\nI Luke Bomberger was asked by my friend Don Reist to try out the program. Being a seagoing cowboy is a lot of fun, you can do a lot of things as one. You help people in need by giving them things they need. There are many reasons to join the seagoing cowboy program.\n\nI started out by heading to Greece, and I turned eight-teen. I was old enough to be drafted then, but when my draft board figured out I was on a cattle boat they said to keep doing it as my draft service. When I was discharged I had made nine trips. I had went to Europe and China when I was a seagoing cowboy. I had fallen once, but I didn't go overboard. During your trips you have to care for the animals, by feeding them and giving them water.\n\nWhen you're not working, you can do many things, like play games, read, and even fence. You can also see some places off the boat. When I was little I used to help out on my aunt's farm. It helped prepare me for being a seagoing cowboy. I had a lot of fun being a seagoing cowboy, because there were so many things to do.\n\nYou should be a seagoing cowboy, because you will be able to care for many animals, and you can see other countries. You can also play games to pass the time between trips. Being a seagoing cowboy would be the time of your life. You could help others while having fun yourself. It is a great program that helps others.\n\nThere are many reasons to join the program, like the ones I just mentioned. You can spend your time having fun, or you can just try it out to see if you like the program. You might end up how I started, by trying it out and end up liking it. You should join the program, because it helps people in need. In the future there might be other programs like this one.",
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"content": "Just A Natural Landform\n\nThe Face has been to be called many things but its pretty clear that it is just a natural landform. If it was really made by aliens would't there be proof of actual aliens? Yeah there should be but there is no proof of aliens, so that is just more proof that the face is just a natural landform. There are many rocky parts on Mars and the face is just one of them people are over thinging it when all it is a pices of land.\n\nTwentry- five years ago NASA's Viking 1 discovered a shadowy figuer that looked like a human face. The thing that set off the people the most was the shadowness that formed a illuison of a face. Then when the face was released to the world everyone though that it had something to do with aliens. Peolpe started to but the face in movies, magazines, make it in a book,and people would talk about it on the radio.\n\nVery few scientist think that it was a alien which i dont think it is a alien. Then NASA sent Mars Global Surveyor to retreve more photos of the face. The pictures they retreved clearly showed that theface was just a natural landform. Think about it the pictures that were taking back in 1976 the technology wasn't great and then when they retook photos in 1998 they were so much clearer. The technology obviously inhasted over that long period of time.\n\nBut people were still not convinced so they went to take another look in 2001 and the picture was even better. People want to think aliens are real but they aren't and this so called face is has nothing to do with them. If NASA were to take more photoes of it today there would be no one who thinks its a alien. Today's technology doen't even compare to the technology they had when they took the last pictures of the face, but people are going to believe what they want.\n\nAll the facts clearly state that the face is just a natural landform. In the beginning when the face was first discovered people though it was a hard fact about aliens ,but technology got better and we could see it better to tell that it was just land. it is really clear to me that all it is a natural landform.",
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"content": "Hello name I think books newspapers magazines censored done nt When I say I mean books dealing adventure romance might parts need censored thats author made book It meant catch attention right first sentence story I believe sometimes magazines need censored promoting bad habits people across people around world Magazines opinion censored Now make less inaproperate somewhat good thing others pretty much let slide figure raise sales ever much percent want considering put magazine I feel books stay shelf however Some people feel censored parts story really catches attention I never expirence field im one strong reader knowing people I would suggest censor things People write books time dealing something happened lifetime something imagination So ca nt really help people think people write published book For readers interesting story passage read back cover book others want book gone neighborhood library house It really depends reader If I could would things I would censor books It idea put story things need left unsaid Some readers appriciate others It really choice read book appealing simply put back shelf find another close I feel magazines censored Constantly see swimsuit models sexual appeal magazines everyday enter grocery store library I think right little kids see looking book book favorite animal Another reason censor magazines would religious views people see look magazine People everyday become right people take offense disturbing images magazines I take offense magazines promoting perfect life sucked read passage As I said I understanding books authors imagination magazines need thrown shelf",
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"content": "In Contemporary esa artificial intelligence growing at an alarming pace and helps nations to come out of disaster situations. Few people believe that the development of robots is very substantial for human allover growth. However other claims that robots brought into the industry put bad effects on humans in numerous ways. As far as I am concerned I believe that machines are important to some limit otherwise, they can be spoiled situations. In this essay, I will discuss both views and I will try to give my own opinion.\r\n\r\nTo Commence with the first view that how easily artificial intelligence can provide help in gruesome conditions. To elaborate on this, it can work more efficiently in some conditions where folks can never indulge such as to tackle infection or work in extreme weather conditions. For example, during the Covid-19 period, several countries throughout the world used machines to fight infections and ultimately it provided significant results in the favour of humans and helped them to come out of these hazardous situations. Consequently, it always can prove very effective in dangerous areas.\r\n\r\nShifting toward the Second view, according to the folks who believe (AI) Artificial Intelligence is a big blow to human availability. It already has begun to occupy places of the public in industrial areas. In other words, massive companies or firms have started to use automatic equipment over the places of humans in order to produce large stocks of consumable things. To cite an example, In manifold developed nations have brought machines in use to accomplish the task before deadlines and try to avoid workforce. As a result, the majority of the workforce across the world becomes unemployed due to advanced machinery.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe advancement such as robotism is very imperative to fight such problems like extreme drought as well as huge flooding or erosion of land where it is difficult for labour to work otherwise the use of automatic operators should be limited by law yet it can help to save the community placements on the workplaces.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are here! They may not be at your local car dealership,but that's because there are a few concerns with safety issues and other things. I think driverless cars maybe the next big thing, but some people disagree with me. I will tell you why.\n\nSafety issues might be the biggest problem with driverless cars. What if the car decides just to run a red light & the passenger gets injured or killed? What if the car goes past the speed limit & will not slow down? What if the car just decides to drive itself? These are all safety concerns people may have about driverless cars, but little do they know, all of these things can happen in a regular vehicle and not just driverless cars.\n\nAnother concern might be roads. If driverless cars need their own special roads where will they be built? how much will it cost? What if a non driverless car gets onto a driverless car road? I'm pretty sure if google is able to manufacture a driverless car all of these issues will be a piece of cake to deal with.\n\nIn conclusion i think driverless cars are going to take a big toll on the world. A good toll. Even though there might be a lot of concerns and issues now with driverless cars, i believe that by 2020 (4 years from now) everything will be very reliable and safe enough for people to actually buy & drive them rather than just test them.",
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"content": "Having a driveless car seem cool and everything, but what about the aftermath? People don't really think about the aftermath of their thoughs and plans, which can cause problems in the future. Making driverless cars is a really awesome idea, and it would be wonderful if we could have those cars in the future. Although they seem awesome, there could be many things wrong while making it and after making it. I am against the development of driverless cars because it would be challenging, there will be money problem, and laws would have to be changed or added.\n\nFirst of all, making a driverless car would be very challenging. Makers would need to learn many things about cars. They wouldn't be able to make mistakes because if they did, the whole car won't work. Also, the car need to be really smart, and they would need a whole lot of sensors. \"The combination of all of this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of human at the wheel.\" If the car doesn't have all that, we don't know what could go wrong. It will also take a long time to make it, and it will just be time wasting.\n\nFurthermore, if people were to make driverless car, it would cost los of money. \"'There was no way, before 2000, to make something interesting. The sensors weren't there, the computers weren't there, and the mapping wasn't there. Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars. It wasn't something you could buy at Radio Shack.' So just how driverless will the cars be in the near future?\" Two hundred million dollars? Why should we waste money on some car? I don't think it is even worth it. We should just be fine with the cars we have right now. We should feel blessed that we can even drive our cars right now because there are millions of people out there that doesn't even have a car. There are many things that we could do with that money like making our environment cleaner and better, so makers shouldn't waste money on some car.\n\nIn addition, if there are driverless cars, the laws would have to change. \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" If there is an accident, we won't know who to blame because there are no drivers. It is just the car driving itself. \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" Changing laws would also be difficult because it would take time to come up with new laws and write them down on the law paper.\n\nFrom the difficuly of making driverless cars to the new laws that would be necessary, it is better just keep things the way they are today. People shouldn't waste their time, energy, and money to make some car just because it seems cool or awesome. It is an awesome idea,but I think it should just be kept in our imagination because I don't think many people would want to spend their time on tring to make one car. There are more to the world than that. So because of the difficulty of making it, the money that is needed, and the necessary change of laws, I am against the development of driverless cars.",
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"content": "Limiting car use to many people wouldn't sound like the greatest idea but however it can be very affective. In the article \" In German Suburb, Life goes on without cars\" it states that 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" said heidrun walter, a media trainer and mother of two, as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor. Driving cars can cause many problems on the road or on the drivers life.\n\nNot driving a vehicle can have many advantages, such as the driver having a less chance of getting injured on the road because of an accident. You never know if you are going to be safe while behind the wheel. You are always at risk while operating a vehicle. Also you can save money by not driving, you wouldnt have to spend money on a car and also not pay for gas and maitenence of the vehicle. In Paris they had to enforce a partial driving ban so that they could clear the air of the global city. This shows that so much carbon dioxide is let out into the atmosphere. Motorized vehicles destroy our air, all pollution of smoke and buring fuels dirtys the air.\n\nIn bogota, Columbia , an event took place to help cleanse the air in columbia. Two Colombian cities, Cali and Valledupar, joined the event for the first time. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said a buisnessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife. A study found that the driving of young age people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. Younger people may be getting more atheltic and excersising by running or riding a bike.\n\nIn conclusion, limiting car usage could be a good thing and help our world. People can save more money, less lives would be at risk and there would be less pollution. I personally think riding a bike to places is fine. People can begin to be getting more fit and healthier by walking, running or riding a bicycle to there destinations. But if where they want to go is to far they can always take a taxi.",
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"content": "Do you think teachers should know what kids are feeling emotionally everyday? In my opinion I think the teachers should know what the kids are feeling. This way it could help the teacher learn more about their students. A device called Facial Action Coding System (FACS) is a system that can help identify human emotions. This system could be used in schools to help kids out in many different ways.\n\nMany kids are grown up in horrible societies. Kids getting on drugs, beat by their parents, and going down the wrong paths. If we had FACS in classrooms teachers might be able to tell if the kid is having a bad time and the teacher could help the kid out. The author states in paragraph 5,¨ Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried,etc.¨ In that statement he says that most people can not tell most of the time when someone is sad or happy. If we had FACS we could tell anyones emotions.\n\nFACS can help the teacher learn if the kids are having fun or are bored in their class. Kids give off many different facial expressions when they are having fun or are very bored. Teachers could see what the kids are thinking about the way she teachers and if the kids dont like it she could change it up and help the kids learn better. In paragraph 6 the author states,¨ For example ifyou smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.¨ This is a great example on how computers communicate with peoples personalities. If the kids like something it will show them more of the same topic but if they do not like a subject it will change the topic.\n\nKids might find it strange that teachers want to read their emotions. In my opinion, if I was little I would think it is strange too. If kids feel uncomfortable about FACS in their classroom, the kids shall not have to be tested of their emotions. It should only be tested if the kids agreed to it.\n\nFACS could be a good way to change schools for kids. Kids with depression is a major problem but if schools could see what the kids emotions are the teachers could help those kids out. FACS could make the school more caring for kids so they can look forward to going everyday. If teachers can not read kids emotions then there is no way they could help change someone who is sad and broke on the inside. Schools need FACS because there are many useful thing that it can be used for.",
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"content": "Even though the article about \"Driveless Cars Are Coming\" state both positive and negative aspects of driveless cars, an argument from me will help give a better understanding. The narrator of this article think that the driveless car can change the future. I think it can change the future but yet harm people in the furture. The driveless car isn't such a bad idea but i will explain how it can and can't be a good idea.\n\nThe driveless car isn't such a bad idea because it can help certain people. Now some older people in ther 70's or 80's can't drive. Most of the time they have to ask for rides from there children or grandchildren, in which can be annoying cause who really wants to ride with younger people. Then here comes the driveless car, an older person in which I feel will be more safe in this car because they are more careful then younger people.\n\nThe driveless car can help the elders get where they need to go without them driving. They can get in the car and just pay attention to the road. This can stop some several problems between family, because little arguments cause the older person needs a ride can tear a family apart, but with the driveless car everything will be better in that case.\n\nThe driveless car can be a bad idea because it can cause problems with teens. Now we do have teens driving and really drive out of control. The driveless car is dangers because some teens don't drive safe, they like to get reckless and show out. So lets say a teen get this driveless car and think its pretty cool, so of course their gone to want to show it off. The teen drives one day and thinks its okay to text and drive and an accident happens. So now there's death and causes that this car isn't safe. A teen is the main people who text and drive now with regular cars.\n\nThere's a slight differences with the regular car and the driveless car dealing with teens. The regular keeps a team eyes on a road more then it will on a driveless car. A driveless car remember you aren't DRIVING so a teen will be more focused on their phones instead of the road. While using a regular car a teen have to focus on the road and his or her car and eventually they will justcput the phone down.\n\nIn short a driveless car in my perspective the car is safer for elders then teens because elder are more controling. A elder person is going to be safer because they pay attention to the road and other drivers around him or her. A teen doesn't really pay attention at all times because him or her is checking their phone and don't mind other drivers.",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "In world live everything getting technilogical In opinion good thing Using computers helpful society They give people opportunity research things fast easily save trees re wonderful way communicate people First computers great use research instead books waste tree A years ago kids would get school project certain country thing would came mind library But nowadays s computers Sure course books helpful internet plus much faster easier find find information re boking You learn place visiting click button learn places far away It really magical Next using computers saves trees With computer nt keep cutting many trees books paper Another sell books online people able read right Honestly really reason keep making books Even students home work test quizzes online I think s mirical s amazing see much world changed years Finally computers great communicate people far away Some people family war nt see months maybe years With computer get emails get deliveres person right sent Or even webcam actually see person face face It must hard able see loved ones everyday computer helpful Even family member away business trip live another statecountry Computers helpful especially today everything going world With computers online research save trees communicate people far away So opinion computers benefit society",
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